Let's Minichu on Flowering

I have a lovely yard
where bright balsams in long pots neatly grow in row.
It's my pride

They grow in shade.
I enjoy the beautiful sight
May fade. 

I love,
looking at it.
Wow

I have a lovely yard.
I enjoy the beautiful sight.
Wow!

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Mohan Chutani

February 27, 2026 at 4:55 AM

Lovely attempt. Few suggestions for your consideration to fulfill format requirement. I have a lovely yard where balsams in long pots neatly grow in row bright It's my bard They grow in shade. I enjoy the beautiful sight May fade. I love, them gryte. Jove! I have a lovely yard. I enjoy the beautiful sight. Jove! I have not checked for syllable count again. That can also be done. So. In this form, after 2-3 iterations, one does get a nice minichu. Hope this will help. My best wishes. Mohan.

Valsa George

February 28, 2026 at 7:30 AM

Thanks a lot for the trouble you have taken in making me understand the Minichu form better, though l didn't get the expected clarity.

Paige Hind

February 19, 2026 at 8:13 PM

very nice, I love this form

sara Etgen-Baker

February 19, 2026 at 5:23 PM

nicely done...filled with positive vibes. exceptional contest entry. sending you hugs, Sara

Jay Narain

February 17, 2026 at 12:02 PM

Nice to view balsams in a nice weather. I love gardens, specially in Kerala in India. Spectacular views all over.

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2026 at 5:38 AM

I, also, enjoy the beauty of vinca, but boy their scent is not lovely, and one benefit of their unpleasant scent is the deer don't like them. Thank you for sharing this one with us, Valsa. Way to go. Sara K