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Let's Meet At Sundown

please meet me as the sun is setting by the old mill road we’ll spend an evening not forgetting sharing heart’s abode we’ll take a stroll down to the river by the city park and cling together as we quiver feeling chill at dark then count the stars up in the heavens lying in the grass while holding tight as passion leavens touches that trespass I long to hear your gentle whisper softly in my ear sweet words of love that make heart blister begging to endear tonight, my love, let’s meet at sundown through the park we’ll stroll together far away from uptown losing all control December 13, 2018

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/17/2019 6:58:00 PM

Hello John! Congratulations on your win. A wonderfully romantic poem Love, Panagiota

John Gondolf
Date: 3/17/2019 7:08:00 PM

Thanks so much, Panagiota, glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/12/2019 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 3/12/2019 12:50:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, I appreciate you. John

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 10:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win, John.

John Gondolf
Date: 3/12/2019 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Line.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2019 11:45:00 PM

A touching, seductive love poem which I enjoyed enormously! Let your pen flow freely my friend and create more gems like this one. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/19/2019 4:50:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful comments, Jennifer, I appreciate it. I do enjoy writing poems such as this. John

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/16/2018 3:26:00 PM

John, what a moving poem. Its so wonderful to recall how very human we all are. Fantastic imagery, too. I am new to the site and have posted no poems yet. Merry Christmas, John. Your poem was an early gift of this season! Panagiota

John Gondolf
Date: 12/16/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comments, Panagiota, and thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you enjoy it as much as I have. I look forward to reading your poetry. Merry Christmas! John

Constance La France

Date: 12/14/2018 3:48:00 PM

John, such a beautiful poem you have penned, full of love, congratulations on your win ~

John Gondolf
Date: 12/14/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thank you for your warm comments, Constance, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2018 12:18:00 PM

A romantic evening is in store for both of you, John. Thanks for allowing readers to join you. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

John Gondolf
Date: 12/14/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. You may join me anytime :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/14/2018 11:28:00 AM

Your thoughts are dancing in the sky, my friend. Once again, congratulations on this win. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/14/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Brandy, I appreciate you. John

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/14/2018 4:52:00 AM

John, this was so beautiful, it pulled me in, one line at a time. Beautiful imagery; well flowing or should I say overflowing, with love and affection.

John Gondolf
Date: 12/14/2018 5:06:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/13/2018 4:29:00 PM

To curl around each other, lost in the soft embrace of love- while the sun sweetly kisses the sky, goodnight. This is beautiful, romantic and dreamy. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/13/2018 4:34:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/13/2018 2:41:00 PM

Well written John. Very nice! :)

John Gondolf
Date: 12/13/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi.