John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Let's Meet At Sundown

please meet me as the sun is setting
by the old mill road
we’ll spend an evening not forgetting
sharing heart’s abode

we’ll take a stroll down to the river
by the city park
and cling together as we quiver
feeling chill at dark

then count the stars up in the heavens
lying in the grass
while holding tight as passion leavens
touches that trespass

I long to hear your gentle whisper
softly in my ear
sweet words of love that make heart blister
begging to endear

tonight, my love, let’s meet at sundown
through the park we’ll stroll
together far away from uptown
losing all control


December 13, 2018

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Panagiota Romios March 17, 2019 at 6:58 PM Hello John! Congratulations on your win. A wonderfully romantic poem Love, Panagiota John Gondolf March 17, 2019 at 7:08 PM Thanks so much, Panagiota, glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole March 12, 2019 at 11:05 AM Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy John Gondolf March 12, 2019 at 12:50 PM Thank you my dear friend, I appreciate you. John

Line Gauthier March 12, 2019 at 10:49 AM Congrats on your win, John. John Gondolf March 12, 2019 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Line.

Jennifer Proxenos January 18, 2019 at 11:45 PM A touching, seductive love poem which I enjoyed enormously! Let your pen flow freely my friend and create more gems like this one. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer. John Gondolf January 19, 2019 at 4:50 AM Thank you for your wonderful comments, Jennifer, I appreciate it. I do enjoy writing poems such as this. John

Panagiota Romios December 16, 2018 at 3:26 PM John, what a moving poem. Its so wonderful to recall how very human we all are. Fantastic imagery, too. I am new to the site and have posted no poems yet. Merry Christmas, John. Your poem was an early gift of this season! Panagiota John Gondolf December 16, 2018 at 3:53 PM Thank you for your wonderful comments, Panagiota, and thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you enjoy it as much as I have. I look forward to reading your poetry. Merry Christmas! John

Constance La France December 14, 2018 at 3:48 PM John, such a beautiful poem you have penned, full of love, congratulations on your win ~ John Gondolf December 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM Thank you for your warm comments, Constance, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. John

Carolyn Devonshire December 14, 2018 at 12:18 PM A romantic evening is in store for both of you, John. Thanks for allowing readers to join you. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn John Gondolf December 14, 2018 at 1:54 PM Thank you, Carolyn. You may join me anytime :)

Brandy Nicole December 14, 2018 at 11:28 AM Your thoughts are dancing in the sky, my friend. Once again, congratulations on this win. :) Brandy John Gondolf December 14, 2018 at 11:36 AM Thank you so much, Brandy, I appreciate you. John

M. L. Kiser December 14, 2018 at 4:52 AM John, this was so beautiful, it pulled me in, one line at a time. Beautiful imagery; well flowing or should I say overflowing, with love and affection. John Gondolf December 14, 2018 at 5:06 AM Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole December 13, 2018 at 4:29 PM To curl around each other, lost in the soft embrace of love- while the sun sweetly kisses the sky, goodnight. This is beautiful, romantic and dreamy. Simply breathtaking. :) Brandy John Gondolf December 13, 2018 at 4:34 PM Thank you my dear friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John

Heidi Sands December 13, 2018 at 2:41 PM Well written John. Very nice! :) John Gondolf December 13, 2018 at 2:46 PM Thank you so much, Heidi.