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Lets Make Love Again

Lets sing the same song With a tranquil note Your heartbeat and my soul Lets become strangers again Where you found me drenched in the rain Enthralled by your passion I lost my inhibition This is how we came close Lets make love again Explore the unexplored That thin layer between us Lets get mesmerised As we get hypnotised.. Lets make love again ...

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Date: 3/12/2016 10:15:00 AM
Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything.
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:14:00 AM
Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything.
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Date: 3/11/2016 4:41:00 PM
You're are amazing when it comes to passion and love, exploring each other, such a sacred, beautiful thing. Well written, Red!Really enjoyed reading this one. "Lets become strangers again "...yes! Fantastic line. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/9/2016 6:44:00 AM
Red, this lovely poem captures the ecstasy of first-time love. It is charmingly wonderful (first-time love as well as your poem).
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Date: 3/9/2016 7:41:00 AM
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:41:00 AM
I think that first time experiences always tend to stay clear in the mind. Experiencing the same passionate emotions over again is a mesmerizing thought! 7/7 Regards // paul
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:13:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:53:00 PM
VERY nice!! I like this kind of a poem!
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:32:00 PM
WOW, this is a nice steamy write... To explore the unexplored, now that's what I call real love making. Love lINDA
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:31:00 PM
Hi Red, I was hoping you had posted a new poem.It was such a treat to have you visit me. How have you been?
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Date: 2/12/2014 3:01:00 PM
Hey Red, am still watching and waiting for your return, so more love can be made...David
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Date: 1/4/2014 12:59:00 PM
Good morning Red, I hope you had a terrific holiday season. I have missed your visits.
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:47:00 PM
Hi Red, firstly a very Happy and Peaceful New Year to you, secondly I love this, it resonates with sincerity and high on emotion I am delighted I came here to see you again and I hope you are well, the message is clear…David
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:06:00 PM
Long time no see red. I hope all is well.
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Date: 11/13/2013 6:06:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic....sensuous and tender...Beautiful, Red.
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:17:00 PM
I really like that line: Let's become strangers again. i think it must be so much more exciting the first time!! Good one.
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Date: 11/11/2013 9:45:00 AM
Good morning Red.
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:23:00 AM
More heat for the soup! I have enjoyed the passionate flavours you have added. Welcome back Red.
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Date: 11/10/2013 8:19:00 AM
Inhibitions, the walls against passion's edge. This was a great declaration of want & need. Well done.
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:27:00 AM
† What An Exciting Thought; To Fill Her Love Coursing Through This Spirit Inside; Sooo Deep ˜ A Beautiful Painting For What Is Greater, Than Love * Love, John
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