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Lets Make Love Again

Lets sing the same song
     With a tranquil note
Your heartbeat and my  soul
Lets become strangers again      
Where you found me 
drenched in the rain
Enthralled by your passion
I lost my inhibition   
This is how we came close
Lets make love again
    Explore the unexplored
That thin layer between us   
Lets get mesmerised
As we get hypnotised..
Lets make love again ...

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2013

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John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 3/12/2016 10:15:00 AM Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything. Login to Reply

John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 3/12/2016 10:14:00 AM Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything. Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 3/11/2016 4:41:00 PM You're are amazing when it comes to passion and love, exploring each other, such a sacred, beautiful thing. Well written, Red!Really enjoyed reading this one. "Lets become strangers again "...yes! Fantastic line. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Paul Schneiter Date: 3/9/2016 6:44:00 AM Red, this lovely poem captures the ecstasy of first-time love. It is charmingly wonderful (first-time love as well as your poem). Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/9/2016 7:41:00 AM :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/8/2016 11:41:00 AM I think that first time experiences always tend to stay clear in the mind. Experiencing the same passionate emotions over again is a mesmerizing thought! 7/7 Regards // paul Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 3/5/2016 11:13:00 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful.... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/24/2016 3:53:00 PM VERY nice!! I like this kind of a poem! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/23/2016 11:32:00 PM WOW, this is a nice steamy write... To explore the unexplored, now that's what I call real love making. Love lINDA Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/3/2014 1:31:00 PM Hi Red, I was hoping you had posted a new poem.It was such a treat to have you visit me. How have you been? Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/12/2014 3:01:00 PM Hey Red, am still watching and waiting for your return, so more love can be made...David Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/4/2014 12:59:00 PM Good morning Red, I hope you had a terrific holiday season. I have missed your visits. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 1/2/2014 12:47:00 PM Hi Red, firstly a very Happy and Peaceful New Year to you, secondly I love this, it resonates with sincerity and high on emotion I am delighted I came here to see you again and I hope you are well, the message is clear…David Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/29/2013 12:06:00 PM Long time no see red. I hope all is well. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/13/2013 6:06:00 PM Very beautiful and romantic....sensuous and tender...Beautiful, Red. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/13/2013 4:17:00 PM I really like that line: Let's become strangers again. i think it must be so much more exciting the first time!! Good one. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/11/2013 9:45:00 AM Good morning Red. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/10/2013 9:23:00 AM More heat for the soup! I have enjoyed the passionate flavours you have added. Welcome back Red. Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 11/10/2013 8:19:00 AM Inhibitions, the walls against passion's edge. This was a great declaration of want & need. Well done. Login to Reply

Johnny Rhinem Date: 11/10/2013 7:27:00 AM † What An Exciting Thought; To Fill Her Love Coursing Through This Spirit Inside; Sooo Deep ˜ A Beautiful Painting For What Is Greater, Than Love * Love, John Login to Reply