Red Fiery Poet I do not know?

Lets Make Love Again

Lets sing the same song
     With a tranquil note
Your heartbeat and my  soul
Lets become strangers again      
Where you found me 
drenched in the rain
Enthralled by your passion
I lost my inhibition   
This is how we came close
Lets make love again
    Explore the unexplored
That thin layer between us   
Lets get mesmerised
As we get hypnotised..
Lets make love again ...

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John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:15 AM Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything.

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:14 AM Just goes to show Love can conquer the greatest distance and challenges and it inspires some pretty good poetry too, Love can achieve anything.

Laura Breidenthal March 11, 2016 at 4:41 PM You're are amazing when it comes to passion and love, exploring each other, such a sacred, beautiful thing. Well written, Red!Really enjoyed reading this one. "Lets become strangers again "...yes! Fantastic line. Always, Laura

Paul Schneiter March 9, 2016 at 6:44 AM Red, this lovely poem captures the ecstasy of first-time love. It is charmingly wonderful (first-time love as well as your poem). Red Fiery March 9, 2016 at 7:41 AM :)

Paul Callus March 8, 2016 at 11:41 AM I think that first time experiences always tend to stay clear in the mind. Experiencing the same passionate emotions over again is a mesmerizing thought! 7/7 Regards // paul

Funom Makama March 5, 2016 at 11:13 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2016 at 3:53 PM VERY nice!! I like this kind of a poem!

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 11:32 PM WOW, this is a nice steamy write... To explore the unexplored, now that's what I call real love making. Love lINDA

Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2014 at 1:31 PM Hi Red, I was hoping you had posted a new poem.It was such a treat to have you visit me. How have you been?

David Williams February 12, 2014 at 3:01 PM Hey Red, am still watching and waiting for your return, so more love can be made...David

Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2014 at 12:59 PM Good morning Red, I hope you had a terrific holiday season. I have missed your visits.

David Williams January 2, 2014 at 12:47 PM Hi Red, firstly a very Happy and Peaceful New Year to you, secondly I love this, it resonates with sincerity and high on emotion I am delighted I came here to see you again and I hope you are well, the message is clear…David

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2013 at 12:06 PM Long time no see red. I hope all is well.

Eileen Manassian November 13, 2013 at 6:06 PM Very beautiful and romantic....sensuous and tender...Beautiful, Red.

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2013 at 4:17 PM I really like that line: Let's become strangers again. i think it must be so much more exciting the first time!! Good one.

Richard Lamoureux November 11, 2013 at 9:45 AM Good morning Red.

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2013 at 9:23 AM More heat for the soup! I have enjoyed the passionate flavours you have added. Welcome back Red.

Poet Tacito November 10, 2013 at 8:19 AM Inhibitions, the walls against passion's edge. This was a great declaration of want & need. Well done.

Johnny Rhinem November 10, 2013 at 7:27 AM † What An Exciting Thought; To Fill Her Love Coursing Through This Spirit Inside; Sooo Deep ˜ A Beautiful Painting For What Is Greater, Than Love * Love, John