Lets Make Love 6

It rained And we were half drenched . 

 My wet RED SARI Invited your eyes

Your unbuttoned shirts Were forced by heavy winds

 

A sudden desire for love and passion BEGAN TO GROW in our soul

 Our long neglected life Was now ready to break splendid isolation !

 The thunder storm brought me closer to you

 

I closed my eyes while Grasping your hands .

 You pulled me up in your great arms !

 My soul melted with your sweet touch

 

We found our space in a wooden house

 My long wet hair Exaggerated your instincts

 We made love throughout the night

 

Our union strengthened our bond of love

 With Our little poetess was soon found

 after a year she came with her tranquil eyes

 

We argued constantly deciding her name

 Mom and Dad , we  became  her world

 Our love flourished with the same passion and joy

 

We made love under the deep blue sky .

 I hear a murmur in my ears 

  Lets make love, Oh my lover
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 27, 2011 at 10:20 PM
your writing,,,just flowes with love,,my dear,,and passion,,,and desire,,,and extasy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so wonderful girl friend.....
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December 16, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Hi Red, I'm hoping my emotions can settle down. You took me on quite a ride and so glad it is all still together; would have hated anything to spoil this sweet relationship. Take care and thanks for posting! Luv, Lizzie
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January 1, 2012 at 12:51 PM
* "MY SWEEET BEAUTIFUL ELIZABETH * MY DESIRE & DREAM WOULD BE * MAKING LOVE YOUR BEAUTY & RED FIERY AT THE VERY SAME TIME * THE THREE OF US ENTWINED * IN THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENT * OWWW * DAISY CHAINS & CREAM * YOUR CREAM * HER CREAM * MY DREAM * 'I LOVE YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV'S * ALWAYS & FOREVER * YOUR SARAH!!'" *
Johnson Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 11:56 AM
And now 7th heaven will find a cure. For two souls who's love is true and pure. A passion deep within one soul. Can shine a light so that two can become whole.
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December 5, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Uuuuuhhh!!! I'm at the end. It's beautiful, warm, romantic and now you made me fall in love with you. That's your fault. Perfect Smriti. Your poetry is love in motion. I got to habe MORE
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December 6, 2011 at 6:21 AM
thank u so much sidney, these are my emotions I had...thank u !
Freeman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:34 PM
sizzle, sizzle, as long as it do not fizzle, we will keep up with the drizzle. Haaaa! Agape, Moses
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October 5, 2011 at 4:06 PM
what a passionate sequence of poems this is smriti, but beautifully written and heartfelt (I hope he likes them!) :-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Passionate work..Enjoyed..I am glad that you found a special line in my work..Sara
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October 2, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Good love making 6!!!!!!.Waiting for the next one~~~~
Hill Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 12:35 PM
you are goddess of love poetry.
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October 2, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Heated write for this Morning .... well written from the heart piece....Michael
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