Lets Make Love 6

It rained And we were half drenched . 

 My wet RED SARI Invited your eyes

Your unbuttoned shirts Were forced by heavy winds

 

A sudden desire for love and passion BEGAN TO GROW in our soul

 Our long neglected life Was now ready to break splendid isolation !

 The thunder storm brought me closer to you

 

I closed my eyes while Grasping your hands .

 You pulled me up in your great arms !

 My soul melted with your sweet touch

 

We found our space in a wooden house

 My long wet hair Exaggerated your instincts

 We made love throughout the night

 

Our union strengthened our bond of love

 With Our little poetess was soon found

 after a year she came with her tranquil eyes

 

We argued constantly deciding her name

 Mom and Dad , we  became  her world

 Our love flourished with the same passion and joy

 

We made love under the deep blue sky .

 I hear a murmur in my ears 

  Lets make love, Oh my lover

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/27/2011 10:20:00 PM
your writing,,,just flowes with love,,my dear,,and passion,,,and desire,,,and extasy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so wonderful girl friend.....
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Date: 12/16/2011 2:17:00 PM
Hi Red, I'm hoping my emotions can settle down. You took me on quite a ride and so glad it is all still together; would have hated anything to spoil this sweet relationship. Take care and thanks for posting! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 1/1/2012 12:51:00 PM
* "MY SWEEET BEAUTIFUL ELIZABETH * MY DESIRE & DREAM WOULD BE * MAKING LOVE YOUR BEAUTY & RED FIERY AT THE VERY SAME TIME * THE THREE OF US ENTWINED * IN THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENT * OWWW * DAISY CHAINS & CREAM * YOUR CREAM * HER CREAM * MY DREAM * 'I LOVE YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV'S * ALWAYS & FOREVER * YOUR SARAH!!'" *
Date: 12/15/2011 11:56:00 AM
And now 7th heaven will find a cure. For two souls who's love is true and pure. A passion deep within one soul. Can shine a light so that two can become whole.
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Date: 12/5/2011 8:23:00 PM
Uuuuuhhh!!! I'm at the end. It's beautiful, warm, romantic and now you made me fall in love with you. That's your fault. Perfect Smriti. Your poetry is love in motion. I got to habe MORE
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Date: 12/6/2011 6:21:00 AM
thank u so much sidney, these are my emotions I had...thank u !
Date: 10/5/2011 7:34:00 PM
sizzle, sizzle, as long as it do not fizzle, we will keep up with the drizzle. Haaaa! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:06:00 PM
what a passionate sequence of poems this is smriti, but beautifully written and heartfelt (I hope he likes them!) :-)
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:06:00 PM
Passionate work..Enjoyed..I am glad that you found a special line in my work..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:54:00 PM
Good love making 6!!!!!!.Waiting for the next one~~~~
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Date: 10/2/2011 12:35:00 PM
you are goddess of love poetry.
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Date: 10/2/2011 10:07:00 AM
Heated write for this Morning .... well written from the heart piece....Michael
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