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lets make love - 1

Can I sleep in your dreams you can be one with me Here I dive in your soul hold my hands and make me yours kiss my neck… let us make… love for ever its now or never dont go away its time to say that I love you and you love me can you say? in this way… close your eyes… lets us fly… in the sky… cross the ocean… miles and millions… lets make love… lets make love…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2012 9:11:00 AM
Wow Red, i think i'm too old for this, but as a poem it is awesome, as are you. harry
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:57:00 PM
Wonderful idea Red but reality tells me I have to make soup and sometimes go to the bathroom. Not romantic I know - bang me on the head!
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Date: 12/6/2011 10:31:00 AM
* "YESSSS * 'LETS MAKE LUV' * I COMPLETELY LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL PAINTING * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL LADY * DEFINITELY BEFITTING OF YOUR BEAUTIES CHOSEN PENS NAME * 'FIERY RED' * SPINNING AMID THE FLAMES OF SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL * HAPPY HOLIDAYS UNTO YOU MY DEAR * KEEP BRUSHING THE TIMELESS BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Date: 12/4/2011 12:26:00 PM
Smriti, How can I forget you. A beautiful poem I cant wait to read the rest
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:56:00 PM
A very good start here of the series~~
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:49:00 PM
The flow is beautiful and the idea fascinates.
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Date: 9/10/2011 6:33:00 PM
This is the third site I have read this wonderful poem in. I wish all lovers had this sense of soul diving unrestrained passion!!!!
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Date: 7/29/2011 6:23:00 PM
Passionate and sensuous write....
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:16:00 PM
fervent and sensous write, very nicely worded with good methaphores..best wishes...old Jack
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