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Let's Get the Heckle and Hell Out of Dodgy City

No more showdowns gunned down man down let down lowdowns sundowns put downs mowed down ground down lock down blown down sounded down Pinned down. Breakdowns... No more shot down in flames.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/2/2018 5:08:00 PM

Now my friend, that is what I call-- "get down". Getting down to the nitty gritty. Wonderfully creative and right fne ending.. A fav...

Aqua Marine
Date: 10/13/2018 6:59:00 AM

And we just have to carry on writing, Robert! ( I have so many poems in process...need to Get down to the nitty gritty of posting them. Asap!) (((HUGS)))

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/25/2018 9:33:00 AM

Loved the way you threw down the gauntlet, ingenious work Aqua...

Aqua Marine
Date: 10/13/2018 6:56:00 AM

That is a fine comment, Charlie! Much appreciated, and comments like this give courage to some of us poets who struggle now and then with insecurity. Carry on writing!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/31/2018 11:10:00 PM

You are so right, no more! Very moving!

Aqua Marine
Date: 9/24/2018 11:37:00 AM

Grateful for your heartwarming words, Michelle! I will visit your poetry soon....