Let's Fight

By the time we got out of our cars,
I don't know whose 
was the worse for wear,
but I know that I was mad.
You were mad, too, but I didn't care,
it was your fault, I was sure of it,
and you were sure it was mine.
An empty parking lot
was a dumb place to crash,
and a dumber place to crash again.
And after first contact, 
we had rammed each other so many times,
and with such murderous intent,
it was a wonder our mangled vehicles
could carry us anywhere at all. 
We were lucky to be alive ourselves.
We might not be for much longer, though.
The movement toward each other,
toward an insane, hateful frenzy
of insane, hateful hammers and nails,
was sure to leave one of us dead.
It might kill us both,
I almost hoped it would kill me.
But the only thing in the world
that could save both of our lives
saved both of our lives. 
And the words were so easily spoken,
it may have surprised us both...
'It's late, Baby, let's go home.'

28th August 2018

To be treated strictly as metaphor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/15/2018 12:56:00 AM
Great poem Lawrence. It reflects well what one goes through when faced with the emotions of anger. Regards. Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 9/17/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thanks Mpho, I'm glad you like it. Best and warmest.
Date: 9/6/2018 3:41:00 PM
Great advice in your poem.. Its always best to tackle our quarrels with a calm attitude and reason...Its not always easy,but its always the best option..Bravo.
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Date: 9/7/2018 7:53:00 AM
Charmaine, thanks very much for reading and for encouraging feedback.
Date: 9/4/2018 9:55:00 PM
Very clever metaphor and well-written. I really enjoyed this!!
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Date: 9/5/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Katie, there for your enjoyment... good to see your pen is getting active again too.
Date: 9/4/2018 3:44:00 PM
Sometimes we just have to say...Let's call it the night. Good write Lawrence
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Date: 9/4/2018 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Charles, glad you enjoyed. The conflicts are not as difficult to resolve as we make them, I guess.
Date: 9/3/2018 6:10:00 PM
Very entertaining!
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 9/3/2018 12:21:00 PM
This is a spirited piece that deals with an unpredictable and calamitous set of events leading to love or at least sex. Your tongue in cheek complaints of an fender bender gone amuck is energetic, bubbly and humorous with just the right amount of realism to make it interesting. Good work! Emile.
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:58:00 PM
A very welcome perspective, Emile. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/1/2018 9:23:00 AM
"It was your fault I was sure of it, and you were sure it was mine" Lol.. I mostly appreciated that line. I mean it happens, it's real. Nice piece by the way..
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Date: 9/2/2018 5:20:00 AM
You're right Karen, it happens. None of this is literal, it's really about the insane conflicts people allow themselves to fall into without recognising that a few calm words can often resolve all the animosity in the world. Thank you very much for your visit, I'm pleased if you liked it.
Date: 8/29/2018 11:05:00 AM
In this corner weighing only as words...the other corner weighing a mighty metaphor...lets get it on! lol...well done Lawrence...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:09:00 PM
Haha... some deft words and metaphors of your own there... thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 8/28/2018 3:03:00 PM
Something special about the way you tell the story..well done indeed! The ending is clever, as is the poem.
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Date: 8/28/2018 11:49:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay, appreciated, as always.
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