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Oh, how we danced In the vast open space, And chandeliers dazzling bright. The lights all crystal clear, And the band tuned so soft. All was fine, as we danced. See her skirt twirling round. Twas indeed a perfect waltz We danced oh so close. Face to face, her perfume, oh so fine, I pulled her near, and we turned all around. The music so soft and its splendour enthralled, We felt oh so glad, dancing close on cloud nine.

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Date: 3/27/2025 8:09:00 AM
Ah everyone has one true love in their lives, and your one true love my dear friend, lives on in your wonderful poetry about her. Victor such a touching write. Hugs and blessings. JENNIFER.
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Date: 3/25/2025 5:11:00 AM
I really like the flow, rhythm, and content of this one. If it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/24/2025 11:42:00 PM
Something I love to watch but something I could never do, I've got two left feet Lol. Tom
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Date: 3/24/2025 9:45:00 PM
Seems the real life experience of the poet.Such a pleasure of life !
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Date: 3/24/2025 8:18:00 PM
Indeed, a beautiful, fun, romantic way to spend and evening. Enchanting write.
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Date: 3/23/2025 11:15:00 PM
What a dance Dear Victor only one imagined by you my friend...
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Date: 3/23/2025 8:54:00 PM
Tender moments on the ballroom floor, dancing a thrilling, perfect waltz, add to the sparkle of a romantic evening. Another wonderful love story, Victor.
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Date: 3/23/2025 12:25:00 PM
Hello Victor, this is lovely piece, So much fun and love in the dance. Loved the picture too. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
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Date: 3/23/2025 11:30:00 AM
So much emotion, Victor. Good going.
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Date: 3/23/2025 8:20:00 AM
I enjoyed this dancing poem . Very fun. Nice ! :)
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Date: 3/23/2025 5:57:00 AM
Sweet romance. Wish I'd have learned to dance. The ladies love it!
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Date: 3/23/2025 5:39:00 AM
Hi Victor, there's is nothing better than a slow waltz with the one you love.
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Date: 3/23/2025 3:15:00 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic and the picture is beautiful - we do swing dancing I guess its more energetic and less graceful than ballroom but we have fun! hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2025 2:47:00 AM
His lovely to have danced on cloud nine, a beautiful memory Victor, and wonderful poetry… Beryl
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Date: 3/23/2025 2:27:00 AM
- A dance as two swans in romance... lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
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