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Let’s Dance

Oh, how we danced
In the vast open space, 
And chandeliers dazzling bright.
The lights all crystal clear,
And the band tuned so soft.
All was fine, as we danced. 
See her skirt twirling round.
Twas indeed a perfect waltz

We danced oh so close.
Face to face, her perfume, oh so fine,
I pulled her near, and we turned all around.
The music so soft and its splendour enthralled,
We felt oh so glad, dancing close on cloud nine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Proxenos Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Ah everyone has one true love in their lives, and your one true love my dear friend, lives on in your wonderful poetry about her. Victor such a touching write. Hugs and blessings. JENNIFER.
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 5:11 AM
I really like the flow, rhythm, and content of this one. If it is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 11:42 PM
Something I love to watch but something I could never do, I've got two left feet Lol. Tom
Singh Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 9:45 PM
Seems the real life experience of the poet.Such a pleasure of life !
DiMino Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 8:18 PM
Indeed, a beautiful, fun, romantic way to spend and evening. Enchanting write.
Tor Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:15 PM
What a dance Dear Victor only one imagined by you my friend...
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Tender moments on the ballroom floor, dancing a thrilling, perfect waltz, add to the sparkle of a romantic evening. Another wonderful love story, Victor.
Gifford Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Hello Victor, this is lovely piece, So much fun and love in the dance. Loved the picture too. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
Bayles Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:30 AM
So much emotion, Victor. Good going.
Sands Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 8:20 AM
I enjoyed this dancing poem . Very fun. Nice ! :)
Read Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Hi Victor, there's is nothing better than a slow waltz with the one you love.
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 3:15 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic and the picture is beautiful - we do swing dancing I guess its more energetic and less graceful than ballroom but we have fun! hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 2:47 AM
His lovely to have danced on cloud nine, a beautiful memory Victor, and wonderful poetry… Beryl
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 2:27 AM
- A dance as two swans in romance... lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
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