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Retrospective 2024

Poem written on 4/13/21

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Let Your Light Shine Through

We are masterpieces for we are uniquely created, masterfully crafted
           with our traits or qualities, gifts and talents to shine.
                          ~~~   Quote by Poet   ~~~


                      LET YOUR LIGHT SHINE THROUGH

                       We are all given gifts and talents.
                 It is up to us to acknowledge or discover
                   and it is our responsibility to work on,
                    develop, fine tune, optimize and use
                 our gifts and talents to light up our stars
              to shine bright and spread the light reflecting
                     what are given to us into the world.

             I wanted to be a dancer when I was a little girl.
                 I just settled on dreaming of it for where
              I grew up; the focus was more on academics,
                   than artistic talents for they were more
              expensive to pursue, going to private lessons
                 and requiring transportation for practices.  

                  However, I was always chosen to dance
                   and perform in front of big audiences.
               In my heart and in my soul, I have a talent
                in dancing and I let that gift shone bright
               to spread the light on the people watching.

                Fate intervened, marrying young, having
                  children, divorcing spouses, becoming
                   a single parent and working like a log
                  to provide for and support my children.
              I became their shining star in my own way,
                 their light to see the bright side of life.
 
                  I gave my all in every position I had.
                    I developed my traits and qualities,
                    learned and used all the resources
                    and became skilled in each of them.

                 I shone for contributing my knowledge,
                   my proposals for better procedures;
                 thereby, getting promotions, receiving
                 awards, praises giving me significance. 

                  I am now in my golden years and find
                      my star shining more brightly for
                  I am sharpening my talent in dancing  
              and discovered my other talents in writing
                    poetry, drawing and choreography.

                     Here I am, a star shining brightly
                     spreading the light reflecting the
                  gifts and talents given to me to share
                   this bright light to everyone I touch.
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Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara K
Evans Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Thanks so much, Sara! Blessings.
Ashley Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Dear Marilene, indeed, you are "a star shining brightly" in life and amongst the pages of your beautiful poetry. I'm grateful that your life's journey led you here to share your poetic gift with the world. Inspiring, deeply felt poetry. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Evans Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Thanks, Susan for your kind words. I appreciate it. Wish you more love and the best for the new year. Cheers!
Agustin Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 2:33 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. May God bless you with a prosperous New Year.
Evans Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Beata for your kind words. Yes, God plans for us is to prosper us and give us hope and the future. Have a joyful and prosperous New Year!
La France Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with your wonderful Free Verse poem, well done, and I like your quote a lot, love _ Constance
Evans Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thanks so much for my placement, Constance! I am so glad that you like my quote a lot. always, Marilene
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations Marilene on your win - dancing star! Your words have spoken my heart. I too love to dance and believe that each of us is needed and each of us is necessary to make the eternal plan work - each of us is indeed uniquely crafted like snowflakes. I just resonated with your poem. Time to get out those dancing shoes! Thank you for sharing your gifts and giftedness. Blessings to you!
Evans Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Have a blessed day.
Y. Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:48 AM
I told ya! Congratulations on a fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Evans Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Thanks, Alexis. Have a great day and a wonderful night.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 10:21 PM
You shine and this gorgeous poem shines too. Each line exquisitely penned. I expect to see this with a golden lei in the winner’s circle.
Evans Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Thank you. Thank you, Caren! I appreciate your compliments. Good night.
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 7:12 PM
WoW! Marilene, What a well-written and inspirational write. I echo what Malabika said; I applaud you for letting your light shine in every situation. You are most definitely a shining light here on poetry soup. Your light shines through in your poetry. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Evans Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 11:00 PM
OMG! Thanks so much, Alexis. You are lifting me higher. Good night.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Such a shining life, Marilene. Applaud you for everything you have achieved. Your story resonates for me - probably with a lot of motivation, in the long run you are able to achieve the best - even in a different direction. BW ~ Mala
Evans Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 6:55 PM
My heartfelt thanks to you. Sometimes life takes you to a different path, no matter how you tried to stay on the path you wanted. With each trials, we gain strength and with will and determination, we always find the way HE is directing us.
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