Let the Drama In

I, the brook of your wails
Sodden my heart
Alongside the sheets of fails
The fault of what is to start

Perhaps the drama
Is too much for such
Fragile, naive.But mama
I'll take a seat and watch

You just ought the drama
To laze 
And let father
Fade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Powerful Words. Great Job. Boo
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Sajdah, it is good to read your write and know the wonder of your thoughts, good write.
La France Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:04 AM
very powerful words, well done
Sheart Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Beautifully written. I was captivated from beginning to end. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for your most welcome comments on my latet poem, very much appreciated. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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