Let the Darkness In

Gloom used to be so familiar to me, 
A second cousin once removed, with similar eyes 
And my own tangled hair 
We used to have long conversations in the dark, 
And stroke each other’s faces, 
Mourning the loss of joy’s bright dancing limbs 
And when the dawn light broke we would shudder, 
Collectively, and huddle beneath the duvet 
Ah we were such good friends, gloom and I…
But then as the years passed I began to resent his presence 
Began to hate his guts
And eventually I kicked him out of bed – 
I thought – forever…
Celebratory days passed, in a blur of unfamiliar happiness 
All sparkling and gilded and glowing with infantile delight 
I threw myself into being normal, loved every minute – 
Until the day came when I met you, 
One suffocating autumn night, 
And Gloom rubbed his hands together in glee – 
Knowing that he could follow you and worm his way back into my heart 
Clinging to you like a leech until he could slip inside me 
And colonize once again the mansion he had lived in; 
The grim black walls of my gothic heart 
So you see, my love, I have a lot to hate you for 
Because not only did you break down my walls 
But you let the darkness in…
And not only did you leave me cold and weeping 
But you gave me despair for a friend…
So run away, darling, while you still can – 
Because rage smolders in my heart, and the grim desire for revenge…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 29, 2009 at 11:24 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Amy. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2009 at 8:40 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I agree wholeheartedly with Catie, in that many do not have the opportunity of a happy childhood. Some just have to take te hand that they are dealt. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more from you. Good job. Casper
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September 29, 2009 at 7:50 AM
This is a wonderful piece of writing. The way you use the personification of emotion is quite clever. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks
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