Let Peace Prevail In Our Country Soon

When we lost hope for the freedom and peace
there is much more tears shed in our country
When all those innocent people lost faith in their leaders
there is no hope for the bright future in our country
When all those priests become politically motivated culprits
then the people lost faith in our worship places.
When all those handful of leaders make ocean of wealth
by squeezing their poor masses blood
When all those saints sit under the temple
trees and meditate fake for sins for the peace
how could the light of Asia "Lord Buddha's "
teaching of dharma will help us to find peace in our country
Freedom doesn't mean that we can do anything that we want
but do right thing at right time to build up a peaceful nation
How many steps we walk closer towards peace and freedom
but till it will remain an endless journey to find it
Let no more war and violence prevail in our country
Oh God, let peace and freedom prevail in our country soon.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2007 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/21/2012 8:51:00 AM
Ravi, this is a awesome sincere poem, shows one aspect, all over the world there are people that want to make peace, pity they are not in government or business.....
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/22/2012 5:29:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Sir. Appreciated
Date: 9/19/2012 1:48:00 PM
May your will for piece guide you, Ravi. I too share the same universal consciousness, for all living beings. And you have certainly uplifted my spirit from my part of the world and I thank you greatly.
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Sir. Appreciated
Date: 9/19/2012 1:16:00 PM
Ravi; this is very well written. It seems to me that you are what I call - a serious writer. You are right in everything that you write here. I think that it is all about money and power. Keep writing. I like your style. Lucilla
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/22/2012 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for your comment madam Appreciated.
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