Let Pain Speak

Contest : Let's Soar With This
Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud
Date : September 20, 2025


Suffused with diffused glint 
of my love at sunset,
you faded like twilight  
in fallen stormy sky.
Angst thunder broke my heart,
the splinters sighed in pain,
cracked voice echoed in void.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Deep and poignant ! I can hear the thunder of agony still rumbling....! Congratulations on your win.
Sharma Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 9:02 AM
The pain is evident and loss is just like the sunset....gone All the best for the contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:27 PM
Thank you for your read and comments.
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