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Let Me Tell You a Story


and the story goes like this . . .
I walk up the dusty, dark staircase that had been my favorite place, playing with my dolls, make believe, dreaming of meeting a prince; Wanting to grow up, but that was many years ago, many heartbreaks ago, my reason today, Grandma has left this world and all in the attic is mine. The door has not been opened in years, it creaks and groans as I push, I stand in the doorway, finding the courage to enter the dampness; The sun filters in through a small window, dust drifts, cobwebs lace the corners, the atmosphere silent, like death, echoing of the past as I look about. No one else wants any of this, they call it junk, only I know the treasures, passing by an old lamp, a stroller, a rocking chair, a chest of drawers, a bed; Portraits of ancestors long forgotten, dusty old things, treasures from the past, a peacefulness comes over me but I am searching for something special. And there it is pushed into a corner, an antique chest, long forgotten, it holds the vintage clothing, jewelry, and writings of the child that was me; Things I had treasured playing dress up, pretending, making up stories, kneeling, my hand touches the ornate surface brushing away dust. Slowly, I open the lid, peeking inside, everything is there as I had left it,, my eyes fill with tears, memories swirling in my head of that little girl; Dressed up in Grandma's old clothes, writing stories on the attic room floor, stories that will become poems for I have found my lost treasure chest. ___________________________ July 21, 2013 Poetry/Narrative/Let me tell you a story Copyright Protected, ID 07-494-069-21 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Submitted to Premier contest, Your Best Poem, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton, Judged 07/2013 Second Place ______________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Any Old Poem #4, sponsor, Skat, Third Place __________________________________ Submitted to the Standard contest, Treasure Chest, Anthony Slausen, Fourth Place
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A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Broken, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations on your win still a beautiful story. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:18 PM
a treasure of a poem Broken wings the imagery is so s vivid - congrats on your win :) hugs jan xx 7 xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:17 AM
you take your reader through the years as you spin your story Connie delightful pen congrats on placing hugs
Roper Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:19 PM
B.W. your poems are always so beautiful. Congratulations on your win with a 7+. Hugs :~)
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 7:07 PM
So beautiful, Broken. Your poem touched my heart with the imagery you present of a sweet but sad real life experience that stirred so many memories for you. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Ah yes, those melancholy memories that filter forever through our minds and pens. Congrats on the high placement.
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Your many poems are your treasures that you also got from these childhood experiences, Constance. A wonderful win for a wonderful poem.
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:01 PM
broken, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE**
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Broken... CONGRATULATIONS... in ANTHONY'S "Treasure Chest" contest.. enjoying your awesome win. ***LINDA***
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:54 AM
stunning narrative and emotions Constance congrats on win Shadow x smile
Docherty Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations on this deserved win - memories are treasures so precious and rare to be valued and kept dear to the ine that beholds. Great read.
A  Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:26 PM
congrats. love ~SKAT~
Adams Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I love this poem...your images are so vivid I felt as though I was there waiting with anticipation for you to open that chest...beautifully penned poem...congrats on your win :)
Horne Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 3:36 PM
lovely nostalgic write
Sivey Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 8:33 PM
This is a very sentimental write about your glorious past, and a special treasure chest! I like how you portrayed just an ordinary antique chest and made it extraordinary! For in your eyes this chest was super special to you, and you showed this perfectly within your poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a pleasantly harmonious poem, Great Work!!
Kearley Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Now that's a treasure chest filled with love... Very nice.
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