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celestial moons celestial suns celestial stars and black holes reflected in our vessels windows all rainbow colours that seemed to bleed into the velvet inkiness of the planet's atmosphere not much was growing on aJAX I could tell as Ij umped from our vessel- jumped high for miles I could see cactus by rivers and the heat was almost palpable sweat was pouring down inside my spacesuit as I jumped I jumped I jumped weightlessly from rock to rock to rock to rock to stone to stone to stone to stone I was alone amongst the cactus and rocks and stones- my cohorts were exploring on the other side of this planet I saw another vessal land gently doors opened and lights whirrd out and a funny noise unfurled itself in my ears zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz I was mesmerized and held in a sort of fearless moment and found myself calling for my fellow spacetravelers they appeared and in a split second a profound connection was made these bubbles of energy consumed us in an embrace filling our organs and our minds with a kind of white light that smacked of Nirvana and suddenly the planet revealed itself to be a garden of eden with air we were able to breathe with our human lungs and many different hued fruit simply dropping from green and white bushes that crawled along the edges of the streams and the bursts of energy were able to assimilate themselves into humans as we discovered we were able to assimilate ourselves into these bursts of energy and we discovered we were one in the same underneath it all - even the planet that gave birth to us out here...............

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