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Winter drew near, its drifting wind calling, the wind did not touch me, until she appeared. I remember that nite, I felt I was falling, memories met then, I feared they mirrored. My words failed to explain my feelings inside, and the past rushed forward to mist my eyes. If she should ever dream, that I lied, the pain would ever linger, never die. I understand this woman, I believe in her song, and nite after nite, I’m searching for mercy. Yet cruel is the morning with its shadow so long, that the answer I seek, is so close, it hurts me. Is she only lonely, occasionally, or desires the warmth of a silken body? Her hands are tight with fear, I fear, oh how I wish I could hold her near! Is it only by nite, in the lite of the moon, can she release her words, or is she jejune? I will sit again by the garden wall, and patiently wait for her to call.

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Date: 1/24/2021 12:20:00 PM
I can really see this one.
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Date: 9/29/2020 3:07:00 PM
This is wonderfully intense and poignant. I’m sure every reader will feel it happening to him or her!
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Date: 11/14/2019 7:19:00 PM
such a sad longing in this one....
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Pax Geist
Date: 11/14/2019 8:19:00 PM
I do sincerely appreciate your time to give me comments, feedback, thoughts on my words. I need to begin reading more of those on this site. Some I write from experience, some from observations, then some just out of the blue or gray as the day may be. Given your nicely succinct ability to express how my words { thoughts } are taken in by you I thought it only right to let you know that my name is Patrick. Pax Geist is Peace Ghost, a pen name. The other name I have used is Elwood P. Harvey, derived from the movie Harvey. I shall read more of yours as I do like your styles. :)

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