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I see the weight of your woes Sagging over your shoulder And its slipping from your grasp Like grains of sand escaping From a tightly clenched fist. Oh, traveler, shake off Your encumbrance! Lord knows... You've walked a fistful of miles, And you've got much more to go. I see your knees are buckling. Allow me to help carry the weight. You mustn't be Atlas holding up the weight of the world alone. Everybody needs a helping hand, So let me share your burden. Written for... Strand No 680,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 02/15/2020

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Date: 2/15/2020 11:12:00 AM
Very nice Edward, Thanks for sharing :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi:-) I wrote this from the perspective of a higher power.

Book: Shattered Sighs