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I wrote this and came up with the melody for the song but I'm not a performer... the background music and vocal are not me. It's an app that can make musical demos of your song lyrics. :)<3
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Let Me See: Through Your Eyes


{verse}
Take this heart of clay in your great hands
mold me and make me new
I am your creation, all souls were made by You
Smooth out these rough edges 
and all my fears cut away
For you oh Father, You are the potter
and I am the clay

{chorus}
Oh oh Great Sculptor of lives
Oh oh miraculous artist divine
See in me the beauty you've made
Oh oh Great Sculptor of lives
Oh oh miraculous artist divine
You make all things new
everything you do shines with 
your light of truth
Oh please let me see
the beautiful me
through your eyes

{verse}
Take this body of clay in your great hands
mold me and make me new
For you are the commander and king
I will obey and follow you
the enemy wants me weak
blind and afraid
But we are warriors of the Most High
all our sins have been washed away
His promises we claim
and the power in Jesus name!

{chorus}
Oh oh Mighty Commander
Oh oh Awesome King and Lord
We stand ready and amazed
See in me,your child,
the warrior you’ve raised
oh oh Mighty Commander
Oh oh Awesome King and Lord
You make all things new
everything you do shines with 
your light of truth
Oh please let me see
the warrior me
through your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Nicole Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 5:46 PM
' I am your creation, all souls were made by You- Smooth out these rough edges. ' This thought makes me softly sigh. It's beautiful, tender and filled with truth. While every word uplifts and inspires, this one tugs deeply at my heart. Your pen is golden, Crystol. :) Hugs, Brandy
Woods Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thank you so much Brandy, that means so much from you. It's so fulfilling to see these words from you... or from anyone who means them, for this is why we write, right?! To connect and relate. Xoxo
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:17 PM
a wonderfully spiritual and uplifting lyrical poem...how often I've wished to see me through His eyes...captivating and engaging poem...faving, have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Woods Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Oh tysm Sara! He sees us through more love than we've ever known. <3xo
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