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I wrote this and came up with the melody for the song but I'm not a performer... the background music and vocal are not me. It's an app that can make musical demos of your song lyrics. :)<3

Let Me See: Through Your Eyes

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{verse}
Take this heart of clay in your great hands
mold me and make me new
I am your creation, all souls were made by You
Smooth out these rough edges 
and all my fears cut away
For you oh Father, You are the potter
and I am the clay

{chorus}
Oh oh Great Sculptor of lives
Oh oh miraculous artist divine
See in me the beauty you've made
Oh oh Great Sculptor of lives
Oh oh miraculous artist divine
You make all things new
everything you do shines with 
your light of truth
Oh please let me see
the beautiful me
through your eyes

{verse}
Take this body of clay in your great hands
mold me and make me new
For you are the commander and king
I will obey and follow you
the enemy wants me weak
blind and afraid
But we are warriors of the Most High
all our sins have been washed away
His promises we claim
and the power in Jesus name!

{chorus}
Oh oh Mighty Commander
Oh oh Awesome King and Lord
We stand ready and amazed
See in me,your child,
the warrior you’ve raised
oh oh Mighty Commander
Oh oh Awesome King and Lord
You make all things new
everything you do shines with 
your light of truth
Oh please let me see
the warrior me
through your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/14/2025 5:46:00 PM
' I am your creation, all souls were made by You- Smooth out these rough edges. ' This thought makes me softly sigh. It's beautiful, tender and filled with truth. While every word uplifts and inspires, this one tugs deeply at my heart. Your pen is golden, Crystol. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/14/2025 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Brandy, that means so much from you. It's so fulfilling to see these words from you... or from anyone who means them, for this is why we write, right?! To connect and relate. Xoxo
Date: 8/8/2025 1:35:00 PM
Is this AI? Gosh the voice sounds so real. Sweet, reverent poetry. Ballad with a gospel flavor to it. Sorry for not keeping pace kiddo. Always appreciate your creations and support. Great lyrics
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/14/2025 5:40:00 PM
Your presence is noticed and appreciated, even in silent moments. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/8/2025 5:42:00 PM
:) :)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/8/2025 5:36:00 PM
Oh hey not complaining! You're the best at commenting here! I'm so grateful you put on so much time to communicate and edify. Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/8/2025 5:36:00 PM
Yess AI, same app I've been using. I love it!
Date: 8/4/2025 4:17:00 PM
a wonderfully spiritual and uplifting lyrical poem...how often I've wished to see me through His eyes...captivating and engaging poem...faving, have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/5/2025 6:13:00 AM
Oh tysm Sara! He sees us through more love than we've ever known. <3xo
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