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Let Me Out

Broken as the muggy backyard philanthropy I'm puking again on another cold morning The hot arteries begin to pound anxiously Let myself out again but got a warning Sit down and cover myself in acetone Soaking the floor the corners begin to close Mother goose help me learn to not moan Let myself out again but she knows Drain out the fried out fluids once more Passion is such a great and deep confection Try to wash out the stain but wake from the floor Let myself out again but paranoia brings affection Realize how much I love myself again Sacrifice my body to the pits of hell It separates the hate from protection Let myself out again but my heart begins to swell Listen to all the poor dying souls They shine positive and strive another day I lie face down in my own hot coals Let myself out again but begin to fade away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
Brett, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:33:00 PM
Brett, very deep.... listen to all poor dying souls... epic imagery... Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 6/22/2013 7:09:00 PM
Thank you.

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