Let Me Make It Easy For You

I used to make fun
of those women that mama
their men, the ones that
hold them up to their ****
like they know how to do
more there than just suckle.
Yet, here I am
shouting instructions at you
on how to save me.
I am giving up.
I'm done with flailing, and
fighting my way
back to the surface.
Don't offer me your hand.
Even saying you love me
as I'm drowning
would mean you give too much.
I won't ask that of you.
Your body used to be an anchor,
but now I believe
you were always just
holding
me
down.
If 10 years wasn't enough,
I'm at a loss for what is.
It's easy to float, but
sinking requires no effort.
Besides,
you were never taught
to swim with the sharks
and we wouldn't want you
to get hurt now,
would we?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Selfa Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:27 AM
I'm speechless. It's very beautiful. :) -hansteven selfa
Elizab Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 9:52 AM
WOW! Felicia, this is certainly deep. Sometimes moving on is the hardest thing to do when a relationship is dead. But we have to rid ourselves of a "Bad Seed" and move on to better people! This piece is a 7 for sure! Please check out my piece called, "Moving On." Hope you are enjoying your day! Pandita
Lane Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 9:00 AM
hmmmm...I'm thinking, I wouldn't mind seeing him get hurt, not physically. I remember having this same kind of conversation before I surfaced. Nice job of venting, Felicia.
Lane Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:30 AM
you will get over it...it took me 3 years, but that too has come to pass. Those memories, though.. they're killers
Elizab Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:19 AM
I'm still waiting to surface, I think. I'm hoping I get there soon. Venting helps, though. Thank you, Lin!
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