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Let Me Let You Die

Look the Pain is Gnawing through ME Bloody Carcass and IM vain Say my name I love to hear it Slur your words with dopeimines Gasping air from murky wated Suspended tendon from a wall Pry a push pin up in Sauder Burn MY words in alcohol Winded cause IM getn Evil Bottems up your gettin high Didnt quiet meet your level level let ME let you die pointing blame Streachy Fingers said I did it, I denied Do not judge ME on your level level let me let you die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2016 3:34:00 PM
Manny, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Light Love Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:41:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:07:00 AM
Hi Manny, I enjoyed reading your poem, today. I wanted to take this moment to welcome you to Poetry Soup and to let you know that you will meet many wonderful people here through words. I enjoyed your poem. Life can be full of pain and judgment. Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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Date: 8/28/2009 6:20:00 AM
Welcometo PoetrySoup Manny. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavor. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2009 4:07:00 PM
amazing write. I like it a lot. I can feel emotion...Autumn
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Date: 8/27/2009 11:22:00 AM
Interesting Lyric. Like the last stanza especially. Sara
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