Let Me Let You Die

Look the Pain is Gnawing through ME
Bloody Carcass and IM vain
Say my name I love to hear it
Slur your words with dopeimines

Gasping air from murky wated 
Suspended tendon from a wall
Pry a push pin up in Sauder
Burn MY words in alcohol

Winded cause IM getn Evil
Bottems up your gettin high
Didnt quiet meet your level
level let ME let you die

pointing blame Streachy Fingers
said I did it, I denied
Do not judge ME on your level
level let me let you die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 21, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Manny, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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November 16, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Light Love Patty
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November 16, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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November 16, 2009 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Hi Manny, I enjoyed reading your poem, today. I wanted to take this moment to welcome you to Poetry Soup and to let you know that you will meet many wonderful people here through words. I enjoyed your poem. Life can be full of pain and judgment. Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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August 28, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Welcometo PoetrySoup Manny. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavor. Love, Carol
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August 27, 2009 at 4:07 PM
amazing write. I like it a lot. I can feel emotion...Autumn
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August 27, 2009 at 11:22 AM
Interesting Lyric. Like the last stanza especially. Sara
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