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Let Me Into Your Heart

Let Me into Your Heart
I fell so in love with you from the start, but you’d built a fortress around your heart. Imprisoning your love inside of you, was like Alcatraz – it couldn’t break through.
You’ve been a desert flower rare and wild; you’ve been a lost soul on a mountain side. But hearts can heal from deception and pain… just as the sun shines brighter after rain.
I’ll break you out of your iron cocoon, and watch you soar by the light of the moon, like a butterfly flitting by with glee… let me into your heart, I’ll set you free.
08-20-2017 Contest: Let Me Into Your Heart Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Placement: 3rd

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Date: 6/10/2018 2:59:00 PM
A lovely one here----love and hugs.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/10/2018 8:33:00 PM
Hi KK, it's been a while - great to hear from you, my friend! I appreciate your wonderful, encouraging compliments! Best regards, love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/10/2018 11:13:00 AM
Awesome poem, Pandita. Love the imagery.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/10/2018 11:23:00 AM
Dear Line, I really appreciate your kind, supportive words. Thank you so much! Pandita
Date: 10/24/2017 1:38:00 PM
It could be this person was hurt very badly, and is still feeling the hurt. I like your rhyme. have a nice day my friend.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 10/26/2017 3:04:00 PM
Dear Darlene, that's true many times when have been hurt in love, we become vulnerable and try to protect our hearts afraid to open ourselves to the possibility of more pain. Thank you so much my friend for enjoying this piece! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Pandita
Date: 9/18/2017 9:25:00 AM
Oh some people can be stubborn! some excellent lines in this, especially the second stanza.. your poems ryhmes very well also..
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/18/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, my dear friend! Always love to hear from you! Hope you are doing well! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 9/1/2017 1:02:00 PM
Loved every word Pandit a you never disappoint!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 9/3/2017 6:11:00 PM
Dear John, it is always so nice to hear from you! Thank you for stopping by and leaving your wonderful complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/30/2017 3:53:00 PM
Hi Pandita: i loved this poem. Especially "You built a fortress around your heart.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/30/2017 7:17:00 PM
Hello Ralph, I so very much appreciate your continued support! Thank you for stopping by my friend. Best wishes always. Pandita.
Date: 8/27/2017 8:05:00 PM
Hi Pandita, your poem is a truly lovely write. I enjoyed your imagery and rhyme very much this evening:)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/27/2017 8:37:00 PM
Hi Susan, thank you very much for visiting and leaving your kind compliments which I very much appreciate! All the best, my friend! Pandita
Date: 8/27/2017 6:53:00 AM
Lovely, emotive, write Pandita!! What a great metaphor of the Iron Butterfly!! All the best, John.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/27/2017 10:35:00 AM
Hi John, it's always lovely to hear from you and I really appreciate your kind, supportive words. Thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/25/2017 8:33:00 AM
Hi Pandita, a wonderful write from your pen, excellent in form and content. The heart is singing in this write. A beautiful piece Pangita. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/27/2017 10:34:00 AM
Hi Mike, thank you very much for visiting and leaving your sweet, superlative compliments which I very much appreciate! All the best, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/22/2017 12:08:00 AM
Beautifully done imagining of wonders of love. Great write, love it James
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/22/2017 12:43:00 PM
Hi James, so glad you stopped by to leave me such a lovely compliment! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 8/21/2017 10:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 8/22/2017 12:37:00 PM
Joseph, I so very much appreciate your continued support! Best wishes always, your friend, Pandita.
Date: 8/21/2017 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful write Pandita....hugs
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, my sweet friend! Always love to hear from you! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Date: 8/20/2017 12:58:00 PM
every broken heart can learn to love, can be loved.nice one
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Date: 8/20/2017 1:07:00 PM
Hi Manyama, thank you for stopping by and leaving your lovely compliments and comments which I greatly appreciate. Best regards. Pandita