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Let Me Into Your Heart

If the power of the mystery of Existence And life Did whisper truth to my ears Why, it would seem that the one to save my soul Is just a heartbeat away! Yes, for my cause, he fell From the abode of grace and stability For my love He accepted to let go of his ruling ego And he did, so subtly, Infiltrate into my own macrocosm To totally submerge my ethos With the many butterflies swirling In mad ecstatic glee in his own microcosm! Why, it would seem that he holds the key To the padlock of my heart It would seem that he knows how to take me There, to that land found beyond the clouds There, from where we fell There, the abode all earthlings yearn for There, where we shall go after our journey ends here! Pray, if only, if only I could be given an entry point Into his heart I would have read and noted all the engravings Found on the walls thereof And I would have made of them, the stories of our lives! Yes, if only I could let my senses be submerged in The engulfing essence therein I would have penned more elevating words of poetry Pray, if I could just wriggle myself in Propelled by a warm touch and by an equivalent desire Why, I could have created for us, An abode on Earth, same as the one from which we fell To allow us both To live in sooth and to make of our stay Worthy of being humanity's love's balm! Why, to allow the taste of my savior's rapture To stay forever imprinted in the very depth of my soul I shall even renounce the world Yes, for, of what use is a temporary and fluctuating world When the glory of eternity shines forth! For Contest Let me Into Your Heart Written on 16 August 2017

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Date: 8/29/2017 8:12:00 AM
Congrats Anoucheka, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:59:00 PM
Hi Anoucheka, a gorgeous, spiritual and uplifting write. I truly enjoyed and admire your style. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a most deserving honor...
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Date: 8/22/2017 5:32:00 AM
beautiful and uplifting Anouchecka many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:33:00 PM
Nice. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your win! Yay!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thks Heidi, it's always a pleasure to be placed 1st :)
Date: 8/21/2017 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your big win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Wow thks Vijay :)
Date: 8/21/2017 4:35:00 AM
What a gorgeous poem, Anoucheka, and a well-deserved win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thk you warmly for the appreciation Greg :)

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