Let Me Into Your Heart

If the power of the mystery of Existence
And life
Did whisper truth to my ears
Why, it would seem that the one to save my soul
Is just a heartbeat away!
Yes, for my cause, he fell
From the abode of grace and stability
For my love
He accepted to let go of his ruling ego
And he did, so subtly, 
Infiltrate into my own macrocosm
To totally submerge my ethos
With the many butterflies swirling
In mad ecstatic glee in his own microcosm!

Why, it would seem that he holds the key 
To the padlock of my heart
It would seem that he knows how to take me
There, to that land found beyond the clouds
There, from where we fell
There, the abode all earthlings yearn for
There, where we shall go after our journey ends here!

Pray, if only, if only I could be given an entry point
Into his heart
I would have read and noted all the engravings
Found on the walls thereof
And I would have made of them, the stories of our lives!
Yes, if only I could let my senses be submerged in 
The engulfing essence therein
I would have penned more elevating words of poetry
Pray, if I could just wriggle myself in
Propelled by a warm touch and by an equivalent desire
Why, I could have created for us,
An abode on Earth, same as the one from which we fell
To allow us both
To live in sooth and to make of our stay
Worthy of being humanity's love's balm!

Why, to allow the taste of my savior's rapture
To stay forever imprinted in the very depth of my soul
I shall even renounce the world
Yes, for, of what use is a temporary and fluctuating world
When the glory of eternity shines forth!

For Contest Let me Into Your Heart
Written on 16 August 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/29/2017 8:12:00 AM
Congrats Anoucheka, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:59:00 PM
Hi Anoucheka, a gorgeous, spiritual and uplifting write. I truly enjoyed and admire your style. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/22/2017 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a most deserving honor...
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Date: 8/22/2017 5:32:00 AM
beautiful and uplifting Anouchecka many congrats on your top place:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:33:00 PM
Nice. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your win! Yay!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thks Heidi, it's always a pleasure to be placed 1st :)
Date: 8/21/2017 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your big win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:30:00 AM
Wow thks Vijay :)
Date: 8/21/2017 4:35:00 AM
What a gorgeous poem, Anoucheka, and a well-deserved win!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/21/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thk you warmly for the appreciation Greg :)
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