Kelly Deschler Poet Quatrain

Let Me Go

You have caged me for too long
I want you to just let me go,
I have to spread these feathered wings
I need to feel the wind's blow.

You know that I love you truly
I said that I would never leave,
I want to see the rain's dance
Not just sit here and perceive.

The scene never changes, day after day
I want to go where white roses bloom,
I have never seen an ocean's wave
And neither have you, I assume.

I need to see the autumn tree's change
I want to see the snowflake's glisten,
I am wishing on the stars as they fall
This is my dream, so please just listen.

I want to fly in the sky's blue
I need to feel the sun's burn,
When I have experienced these wonders
I promise that I will return.

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Weston Gregory April 5, 2016 at 10:59 PM I like this piece. Nice read. Kelly Deschler April 28, 2016 at 2:10 PM Thank you, Weston. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

James Horn May 9, 2015 at 8:37 PM Let It Be sounds like the song you wrote. If you have any more information on PVT Lester E. Deschler let me know. Jim Horn Kelly Deschler May 13, 2015 at 1:11 AM Thank you, Jim. I have sent a Soupmail with all the information I could find on my uncle. I hope it helps.

Tim Smith January 3, 2015 at 7:54 PM Stopping back with more congratulations on this beautiful piece....hugs Tim Kelly Deschler January 6, 2015 at 8:13 PM I really appreciate that, Tim. Thank you so much! Hugs :)

Jan Allison January 3, 2015 at 9:00 AM a beautiful piece of writing with such a lovely flow many congrats kelly:-) Hugs jan xx Kelly Deschler January 5, 2015 at 8:33 PM Thank you very much for the nice comments and congrats, Jan. Hugs :)

Kayod5 Kayode January 3, 2015 at 8:48 AM Another super Poem from you Kelly,congrats on the win and happy new year my friend...huggs Kelly Deschler January 5, 2015 at 8:22 PM Happy New Year to you, Kayode! I appreciate the kind congrats and comments. Thank you so much... Hugs :)

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2015 at 10:17 PM Kelly, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*

Rene Chabriere December 23, 2014 at 1:53 AM ok... when you come back... you'll have a lot of marvellous things in your eyes ( heart)... Kelly Deschler December 27, 2014 at 6:03 PM Just being given a little freedom can do wonders for a person... I do appreciate your kind words, Rene. Thank you so much!

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2014 at 3:53 PM I love this one, Kelly. I think I saw it before but I keep clicking and clicking on your poems and am going in circles looking for one I have not commented on. This would be one of my favorites of yours this past month or two! Kelly Deschler December 15, 2014 at 1:34 AM Thank you so much for your kind words, Andrea. This is also one of my favorite poems that I've written recently. I was delighted when it was chosen as Poem of the Day!

Robert Lindley December 5, 2014 at 10:01 PM So glad I dug deeper to find some inspiration tonight. I have started writing a poem for my wife and its came from my reading this wonderful write by you! thanks much and this is a super 7 .. Kelly Deschler December 13, 2014 at 1:10 AM You're welcome, my friend. I'm so happy that my poem has inspired you to write. I look forward to reading it... Thank you for your kind words, Robert. I appreciate them so much!

Shadow Hamilton November 18, 2014 at 11:46 AM Excellent portrayal an exquisite journey Kelly love it 7 hugs Kelly Deschler November 23, 2014 at 8:41 PM Thank you for your kind words, Shadow. I'm so glad you liked this poem! Hugs :)

Zakhe Michael Mcunu October 20, 2014 at 4:53 AM nice placement of words, keep it up. Kelly Deschler October 25, 2014 at 1:14 AM Thank you very much!

Justin Bordner October 18, 2014 at 7:50 PM An entreaty from a soul desperate for a sensitive body, willing to travel with the unpredictable weights of a new world. Your plea is so passionate in naivety, I love it...this poem of anxious spirit reminds me of reincarnation, rebirth from one heart to another Kelly...J.A.B. Kelly Deschler October 23, 2014 at 12:57 AM A heart seems to reincarnate itself more often that we realize.... Sometimes, I want to hide away in the darkness, and sometimes, I just need to fly free out into the sunshine. And, even though we know what is waiting out there in the world, we still need a little taste of that freedom.... Thank you for your heartfelt and insightful comments. I'm really happy that you enjoyed this poem, Justin!

Sara Kendrick October 17, 2014 at 2:37 PM Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading a dream.,.I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 6:33 PM You're welcome, Sara. I always enjoy your work. Thank you for your kind visit, as well. I appreciate it very much!

Tim Smith October 16, 2014 at 11:36 PM Congrats Kelly...happy to see this showcased.... Hugs Tim Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 2:20 AM Thank you very much, Tim! It really was a nice surprise when I saw that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day! Hugs :)

Verlena S. Walker October 16, 2014 at 4:34 PM Congratulations Kelly on the poem of the day... Spiritually well done... Verlena Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 2:07 AM Thank you for your kind words, Verlena. I appreciate them very much!.... It was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

BE Bailey October 16, 2014 at 3:41 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Kelly. Beautiful poem. Warm regards "B" Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 1:41 AM Thank you so much! It was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

Nette Onclaud October 16, 2014 at 1:21 PM this POD is meant for you, Kelly... excellent imagery.. huggs Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 1:28 AM Thank you so very much, Nette. I always appreciate your kind words! .... It was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day! Hugs :)

Paul Callus October 16, 2014 at 12:57 PM Congrats on being chosen poem of the day, Kelly! This poem is a beauty; great imagery, reflecting on the urge to experience new things in life. Well done! // paul Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 1:13 AM Life might become a bit boring if we didn't try something new, at least once in awhile! ....Thank you very much, Paul. I always appreciate your kind comments. It was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

Carol Eastman October 16, 2014 at 12:43 PM Congratulations on the poem of the day. A very enjoyable piece of work. Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 1:02 AM Thank you very much, Carol. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. It was a nice surprise to see that it had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

Gary Bateman October 16, 2014 at 10:23 AM Congratulations Kelly on a most wonderful write her with "Let Me Go." I'm very happy to see that it is "Poem of the Day." The strength, simplicity, tempo, and tone are marvelous. You conveyed you message most clearly in five balanced quatrains. And it is a most obvious "7" too from me. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Kelly Deschler October 21, 2014 at 5:46 PM Thank you for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them so much, Gary.... It really was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2014 at 8:24 AM congratulations kelly really beautiful piece of writing sang in the mind with an excellent flow Kelly Deschler October 20, 2014 at 2:06 AM Thank you so much, Liam. I'm really glad you enjoyed this poem! It was a nice surprise when I saw that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day!

Maurice Yvonne October 16, 2014 at 8:20 AM Happy to see you have been chosen to be exposed with this one of many fine writes. Congratulations on your poem of the day. I hope some take the time to read your many more. Kelly Deschler October 20, 2014 at 1:52 AM It was a nice surprise to see that my poem had been chosen as Poem Of The Day! Thank you once again for being so kind, my friend. :)

Maurice Yvonne October 16, 2014 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on having earned your wings. You always had, it's just that they were hidden under the suits people place on us. Now that your wings are unwrapped Love Kelly, above all else, Love. Kelly Deschler October 20, 2014 at 1:49 AM Thank you so much, Maurice. I was really touched by your kind words. I will try to put those newfound wings to good use!

Robert Lindley October 15, 2014 at 8:12 PM I let you fly away so free your life means that much to me, A journey you must make with you .... my love do take Love is fruit on a loving tree rainbow fish in a shining sea granted now, your sweet plea...... Awesome write my friend.... A very super 7 from me...... Kelly Deschler October 19, 2014 at 8:52 PM Thank you for such a wonderful and uplifting comment, my friend. I appreciate it very much, Robert!

Daver Austin October 15, 2014 at 11:40 AM Outstanding. When you're in a box you must lift the lid, eh. Everyone needs space. Great stuff. Love, daver Kelly Deschler October 18, 2014 at 11:41 PM Thank you so much, Daver. I really appreciate your kind comments.... Yes, indeed. We all need a little more freedom to breath, every now and then.

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