Let Me Go

Let me go show me out the door with kind words I want you to Love me .. not punish by Force My Prison, my warden Let me go My choice to be Free Free of suppression, of my own creativity let me decide for myself my destiny Let me go let go of me gracefully I belong to myself , children and God Let me go , let go of me I am free to choose to love and give I am Free from what burdens me now I am Free

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 8:45:00 PM

Shanity This is so full of emotion and feeling. You pull at the heartstrings and touch the readers soul Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/25/2013 12:48:00 PM

Be free Yvette, be free! This seemed to have come from the heart, I feel your emotion, thanks for allowing me to do so. MC

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/25/2013 1:23:00 PM

you are welcome .. Yet again , I think you have a beautiful soul , very creative and loving .

Pol Anto

Date: 8/23/2013 12:14:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I love "let me go" - I hope you found the freedom to be you !

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/23/2013 1:12:00 PM

Your poems were amazing , the ones I was able to read! I want to dedicate one day to just reading all my favorite and new poets ! You are one , Thank-you ;) Yvette merci bou coup~