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Let Me Go

Let me go
 show me out the door with kind words
  I want you to Love me ..
  not punish by Force
 My Prison, my warden 

                 Let me go
          My choice to be Free
      Free of suppression,  of my own creativity
       let me decide for myself
               my destiny 

                Let me go
           let go of me gracefully
     I belong to myself , children and God
       Let me go , let go of me 
                 I am free 
            to choose to love and give
                 I am Free 
          from what burdens me 
                now I am Free

Copyright © Shanity Rain | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 11/26/2013 8:45:00 PM Shanity This is so full of emotion and feeling. You pull at the heartstrings and touch the readers soul Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions. Login to Reply

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 8/25/2013 12:48:00 PM Be free Yvette, be free! This seemed to have come from the heart, I feel your emotion, thanks for allowing me to do so. MC Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 8/25/2013 1:23:00 PM you are welcome .. Yet again , I think you have a beautiful soul , very creative and loving .

Pol Anto Date: 8/23/2013 12:14:00 PM Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I love "let me go" - I hope you found the freedom to be you ! Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 8/23/2013 1:12:00 PM Your poems were amazing , the ones I was able to read! I want to dedicate one day to just reading all my favorite and new poets ! You are one , Thank-you ;) Yvette merci bou coup~