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Let Me Fly Away

Let me fly away …. Let me fly away … Open up the door now; let me fly away. I will be in pain more if you let me stay. You promised me flowers, nightingale delight, I cannot face darkness; darkness is the night. My cup is so empty; pour me some more wine, I cannot live this life; death will be so fine. In the house of shadows, I can see the sky, I can see the mountains; I do not know why. Let me fly away now, I can see the road, I can see my home there joyously it showed. I am so so lonely; shadows are my friends, Stop watching; tell me when this journey ends. I do have the wings now purple, white, and blue, I know where you are now; I will follow you. I will fly away now until morning bright, I want to be someplace that is never night. Take me with you “Haloo” pour me some more wine, I want to be all you if the choice is mine. 8/7/17 Haloo This is another painting of mine, called Let Me Fly Away. It is acrylic on canvas.

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Date: 1/23/2018 5:31:00 PM
It's funny that everyone seems to want to fly someday. Yes, I do too. Lovely, dreamy poem Pashang. Carole Duet :D
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/23/2018 10:43:00 PM
Let's fly together....Thanks dear..
Date: 12/21/2017 10:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing Pashang. Love is a disease that you cannot catch without being exposed.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/27/2017 7:21:00 PM
Indeed, thanks Carlos...
Date: 10/26/2017 8:09:00 PM
I may have seen all your recent poems. Please inform me if you have any old ones that you are especially proud of in case I never saw them!!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/27/2017 8:03:00 AM
Of course my dear
Date: 9/13/2017 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations Pashang on your win with this very creative write! :) Susan
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/14/2017 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Susan.... You are so kind.
Date: 9/13/2017 3:58:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/13/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 9/13/2017 8:58:00 AM
Pashang, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/13/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thanks dear...
Date: 9/13/2017 5:50:00 AM
A deep write, if only one could fly.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/13/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thank you my friend for considering my work....
Date: 9/7/2017 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Pashang! Janice
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/11/2017 2:29:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 9/6/2017 11:31:00 AM
what an excellent poem my friend.. Hope all is well with you..
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/11/2017 2:29:00 AM
Thank you my friend.....
Date: 8/30/2017 10:18:00 PM
Love the painting. It just invokes insightful expression. The tenderness so delicate that lives inside. Awaiting the light to escape beyond the darkness. A little help from the elixir. The magic word to keep and transfix her. You've expressed both venues well. :) How do you like that for a word huh? :) well :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/31/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Robert for kind words...
Date: 8/29/2017 12:33:00 PM
Fantastic painting and wonderful poem. You are truly very talented. Enjoyed them immensely.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/29/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you Frank
Date: 8/27/2017 6:23:00 PM
Love the impact of your painting and your write, Pashang, you put your whole self not only in your writings, but your artwork. <3 ~*
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/27/2017 9:48:00 PM
Isn't that the whole definition of art..... thanks
Date: 8/27/2017 4:24:00 AM
Excellent. A heartfelt write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/27/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Ravi...
Date: 8/26/2017 3:47:00 AM
Such a lovely write! Sometimes I wish I could go to such a place. Kindest regards
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/26/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend.
Date: 8/25/2017 11:18:00 PM
I love that you do the painting and the poem. Kind of a sad poem. Pour me some more wine.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/26/2017 6:14:00 PM
Anytime Becca... Cheers..
Date: 8/23/2017 5:56:00 PM
This is really beautiful and very descriptive! The words can really put your heart on fire.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/24/2017 12:55:00 AM
That was not my intention to burn your heart, but thank you very much....
Date: 8/18/2017 9:27:00 AM
...shadows are my friends, what a provocative line.
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Date: 8/18/2017 12:30:00 PM
Stop watching, tell me, when this journey ends..... Thanks Scott
Date: 8/17/2017 5:16:00 PM
I dropped by to reread this gem. Brilliant post.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/18/2017 12:31:00 PM
You are always welcome..
Date: 8/17/2017 12:47:00 PM
- I've read this poem ... I have admired this painting ... but obviously I forgot to write a greeting ... - A wonderful sense of freedom ... beautiful in word and image, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/18/2017 12:32:00 PM
Greeting to you as well.... are we all free?
Date: 8/17/2017 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful poetry and visual art Pashang, every movement drips with freedom unrealized. Keep up the great work. Namaste.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/17/2017 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Phil.... thank you for kind words... Salam and Namaste....
Date: 8/15/2017 4:46:00 AM
A melodious write ... Wonderful ... Thank you for liking my Anemone Whispers ... The coincidence you have mentioned is interesting ...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/15/2017 6:40:00 PM
thank you Probir for such a wonderful remarks..
Date: 8/14/2017 8:15:00 AM
Pashang, this poem and the artwork are breathtakingly BEAUTIFUL. You have so movingly described the emotions of one who is trapped! Janice
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
You said it.... I'm ready.... thank you
Date: 8/14/2017 6:10:00 AM
Wow! This gem flows so well in my lung. What a beautiful poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/14/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for kind words and thank you for visit..
Date: 8/12/2017 5:32:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! You are one of the most talented artist, and I love your work :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/12/2017 12:09:00 PM
You are so kind Akkina...
Date: 8/12/2017 12:08:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading it . Thanks for sharing it. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Appreciated.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/12/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Ravi...
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