Let Me Dream

The song that is playing 

Reminds me of you

Takes me back when we first kissed


The touch of your lips

Filled my poor heart with bliss

It felt like a dream come true


And from the verse to the bridge

Where there's breaking of hearts

The singer croons I love you


I swear the world could end right there

Because I loved you too


So barman pour me a drink

Double scotch on the rocks

Let me dream...

About a girl I used to know

Should have never let her go

How I miss her so much... 


Mix vodka and soda

Bubbling with joy

Let me dream...

About a woman that made me feel

The man I dreamed to be

Play that song one more time

Let me dream

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Date: 6/28/2019 5:26:00 AM
I imagine many people can relate to this poem. This line grabbed me: "Let me dream... About a woman that made me feel The man I dreamed to be".
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/28/2019 6:07:00 AM
Definitely a woman is not separate or apart from man...without her there's no dream...no love
Date: 6/26/2019 1:59:00 PM
Hi Arturo, Sometimes dreams last forever and are repetitive in our lives, who knows maybe someone exactly the same as the love you had, is waiting just around the corner! Life goes on and being the romantic you are, everything is possible! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/26/2019 2:15:00 PM
I hope so...A lovely night to you...
Date: 6/26/2019 12:18:00 PM
Gorgeous lyric here, Arturo. I was right there with you on that barstool, man. Make it a triple scotch on the rocks! :) gw
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/26/2019 12:24:00 PM
A triple coming up...I wouldn't last too long with you in the bar...
Date: 6/26/2019 8:31:00 AM
You! Such a romantic poet! Perfectly penned, Arturo. I can relate to this Panagiota
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/26/2019 9:20:00 AM
I guess the real ones are clear...Thanks Panagoita...It's life...
Date: 6/25/2019 12:28:00 PM
Dreaming's good - carrying a torch so long, not so much. LOL
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:49:00 PM
So right... much too long...just came out though...Thanks Sunlite...
Date: 6/25/2019 10:48:00 AM
this would make a most poigant song, Arturo Very well done.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...Will try it...
Date: 6/25/2019 7:13:00 AM
Love and heartbreak..your videos are so expressive.. and so are your words, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:44:00 AM
Tumbs up... Good observation... toned it down a bit... for poetry
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:20:00 AM
Yes Vijay...it's there...the love and heartbreak...
Date: 6/24/2019 9:49:00 PM
makes me swoon, arturo... should be turned into a song!... huggs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:25:00 AM
It should be done in a song...it's happening now...Thanks nette... It's good to be alive...
Date: 6/24/2019 9:21:00 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic, as moments unfold. Longing is evident, as that sweet ache of love lingers. Your heart upon the page. In a dream, anything is possible. ~ Brandy
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/25/2019 7:27:00 AM
Almost....Thank you Brandy...Good to see you here...
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