Kaveesha Ruwindi Poet Monorhyme

Let Me Cry

Let me cry, until I've come to my last tear.
To cry out my feelings, say aloud my greatest fear.
But with you, being so close and near,
I feel no fear, my path is crystal clear. 
But when I cry, please know this, my dear,
I won't be like what I used to appear. 
I used to beam and shine, throughout the year. 
But each word you said, each look of sneer,
pierced my heart, as if it was struck, by a spear.
And now, by crying to the last of tears, I want you to hear,
All my feelings, and know that I'm not a mere frightened deer. 

*not for the contest.

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Charles Messina March 24, 2019 at 6:15 PM This is wonderful and so heartfelt, Kaveesha. Beautiful my friend...Charlie Kaveesha Ruwindi March 27, 2019 at 12:27 PM Thanks for this encouraging comment :)

Laura Leiser February 2, 2019 at 4:41 PM This is so good, you should enter it in the contest! Enjoyed the emotions conveyed! Kaveesha Ruwindi February 3, 2019 at 10:08 AM Thanks Laura. Your comment is very encouraging. I actually mean to submit a much better one. Thank you again for it made me feel better, :)