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Let Me Be Your Number One--A Collaboration With Jimmy Anderson

I can't control what I'm feeling inside Come with me baby and take this ride I'll take you where you wanna go! In a rush or soft and slow Never again will you be lonely Want to be your true love only Let them talk-it won't make me run Just let me be your number one! You will be my number one,two,three,four,and five Just believe in me,for I've never felt so damn alive! Let them talk,it's just the jealousy in them You better not walk,for we are the perfect item! They can feel my rhymes,the magical and heavenly flow People prejudged me for my crimes,and yet only a few really know You loved me from the start,and yet you didn't care what I'd done So I gave you my heart,and made you my number one! *Note: I wrote the first two stanzas and Jimmy wrote the last two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2011 12:36:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration Jimmy and Deb. You two write very well together. ...Annalise
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:54:00 PM
Deb, you and Jimmy make a fine writing team. This could be a song. Bravo to both of you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:52:00 PM
This would make a great song for a singing duo, for sure. Tell Jimmy I said so. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:19:00 PM
Excellent collab Deb and Jimmy is a gifted writer as well .. two forces bringing forth romantic quality luv.. left me quite breathless... happy u enjoyed my "Honey Poo".. it pays to be patient is the lesson we both learned .. and now rewards abound luv..
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:57:00 PM
The collaboration is number one for the feelings of love, deb
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