Let Me Be Your Heart's Guest

Living inside your heart,
Is like living in a prince’s castle.
The color of your love is pale, 
As your haze is strong even from the gale.

Seeing you in a very first time was my mistake,
And; gaining you is my only sanctify.
Each and every instant is a rage,
Without you this mundane is a cage.

Now I’ve understood,
This world is intangible for me.
The only place to live is inside your heart,
And want to be its part.

Let your heart be my dwelling.
Or feel me as a guest
I will give you the love and my feeling,
In me which is only rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fiery Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Powerful words! Captivated now. Love gives thr greatest joy and sorrow at the same time. Thanx for commenting on my Vampire's love....
Valmiki Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 8:15 AM
thank you very much, keep visiting.
Minardi Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Woww, you have a great writing here, Amit. Seriously, this is flow just like that and leave a meaningful trace in my heart. Touche! Thanks for stopping by my page. Dinda
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