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LET ME BE EVE AN IMAGINATION OF ANOTHER LIFE Oh let me be Eve, And make me forever live In this heavenly place of a crib. And let me be taken from Adam's rib On this day when he embraces sleep, And also my eyes keep From the starry face of the evening, Ceasing my infantic ears from listening To the unending flow of the Euphratic stream. And please let it all be a dream, That Adam acting with chariness, Toppling my own attitude of coyness, Decides to go and mingle with Shark, And I to Cedar to tend her bark. And while I admire her establishment, Serpent arrives, brimful of blandishment, And in his most dictumic way, Makes me to the tree stray. And not halting at my tabooed satisfaction, Offers Adam some to relieve his trepidation. And while checking out our sanity with doubt, Wondering why we have it all brazen out, Arrives God suddenly like a cataclysm. And we at this moment aware of our chasm, Flee to Fig with furtive, Feeling for the first time like fugitive, And not even Adam's casuistry, Returns us to being God's emissary. Oh let it be a dream still, That Adam and I leave with nil The treasure trove that had been home, And not even the Millennium Dome, Could have been to us a better haven, Like Eden that feels like heaven. Let it be that I'm turning on my side, That the one I call my child, Takes out his anger on his brother, And his children kill one another. That my daughters die at child birth, And my generation create their death, All for this dude that I never knew While I lived, but now becomes new As each cursed day passes by- My children only living to die For Money, brow beating one another, Not even leaving out their brother. And at the end, they all hasten To do nothing, but me chasten. Now let Adam surprised at my sight, Wake me from this slumbering fright, And this time casting my coyness aside, Ask him to always be by my side. And if Serpent decides on my way to come, We will step on his crooked head with aplomb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 3/8/2016 12:19:00 AM
Nice to see this one again
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:52:00 PM
Hope to see you back this year. 2016..skat
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:47:00 PM
wow..powerful, Temitope,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:53:00 PM
Nice interesting thoughts with good expressions
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:57:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Temitope ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2013 7:45:00 AM
wow! in another parallel universe this might exist.. love it. Temitope, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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