Let Me

let me flow 
with the waves
one more time,
oceans are keen
to have someone.

let me borrow
some sweet dreams
from slumbering moon
some nights are dark
but, that's not forever.

let me show
my flaws to the world
it's a beautiful realm,
the mirror of stones,
glasses are too fragile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Anvita Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Thanks a lot for your feedback and words of blessings. I am grateful to you.
Bangalee Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:50 AM
Lets, refine the flaws to be soars of the peacefulness
Anvita Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Well said...great words!
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