Let Me

let me flow with the waves one more time, oceans are keen to have someone. let me borrow some sweet dreams from slumbering moon some nights are dark but, that's not forever. let me show my flaws to the world it's a beautiful realm, the mirror of stones, glasses are too fragile.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/20/2024 4:36:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Aditi Anvita
Date: 7/30/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your feedback and words of blessings. I am grateful to you.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/4/2022 12:50:00 AM

Lets, refine the flaws to be soars of the peacefulness

Aditi Anvita
Date: 7/30/2024 9:39:00 AM

Well said...great words!