Let Love Be

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Right now I lay me down to sleep Sing Beetles great song “Let It Be” I’m troubled with insomnia Sleep is a dream can’t get enough Life is good I can’t complain I have shelter from the blue rain Wish I had love but I’m content It is enough to pay my rent For love came in a narcissist Wasn’t the same there was a twist He seemed real as he love bombed me Was a thrill until truth you see Walk away from love fantasy Wait for real love and let it be All you hope for will someday come Be patient my dear for true one

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 6/8/2025 12:51:00 AM

Lovely right write! Have a nice day lovely Karen :-Best wishes ~ hugs AA

Karen Jones
Date: 6/8/2025 5:10:00 AM

Thank you for reading so many of my poems Abdullah! Have a blessed day!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2025 8:43:00 AM

Those last 4 lines are great advice! Some might give you a short term thrill, but you might become bitter, alone, lost.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/7/2025 8:48:00 AM

Exactly! Thanks for reading and for confirmation.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2025 11:39:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Let Love Be" write. I find counting my blessings at night will make me fall to sleep. Your king is on his way. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................

Karen Jones
Date: 6/6/2025 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Paula!