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Let It Rain El

From the beginning of time, long before mankind's decline; and EARTH was calm and still; and before Cain learned to kill; RAIN did not descend the SKY like a cool breeze passing by, From the beginning of time. 070521PSCtest, Elemental, Charles Messina Included three elements, Earth, Rain(water), Sky 7 lines, 7 syllables per line, Rhyme-AABBCCA First and last line the same.

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Date: 7/31/2021 6:40:00 AM
Great poem, Curtis. For some reason I either missed seeing this or it didn't show up in my contest. However, I am glad it showed up and I read it and you received an HM. I would have placed this higher. Sorry if I missed it. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/31/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Charles. I'm honored. Blessings.
Date: 7/31/2021 4:47:00 AM
This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 7/31/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj

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