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LET IT PLAY ON

From the violin of lady fair
soft classical notes fill the air.

soothing music floats through open french doors
carried on a summer breeze
billowing lace curtains 

As I lie upon the chaise lounge
in and out of sleep I doze.
Sweet melody a lullaby.
Heavy eyelids begin to close.

Deep in my slumber 
he comes to me in a dream.
In his arms I swoon
as we waltz to Blue Danube.
Forever let it play on.



Broken Wing's contest.
It's All About Four.
23/04/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/1/2018 8:17:00 PM
Jean, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 5/2/2018 4:09:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 5/1/2018 10:28:00 AM
Oh wow, gorgeous
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 5/1/2018 2:09:00 PM
Not as wow as your recent offerings unfortunately Tim.
Date: 4/30/2018 4:25:00 PM
Hi Jean, beautifully penned my friend:) congrats ::))))Hugs~~~~Niall
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Date: 5/1/2018 2:08:00 PM
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Date: 5/1/2018 10:28:00 AM
Quack
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/30/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Niall.
Date: 4/30/2018 4:11:00 PM
music to my ears... big congrats, jean.. huggs
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/30/2018 4:13:00 PM
That's lovely Nette. Thank you.
Date: 4/29/2018 5:46:00 PM
I started from the bottom up, seeing most of the poems and working my way up the list. So far, this is one of my favorites. Just beautiful. Congrats for your win, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 5:55:00 PM
That is just the sweetest thing, especially from you Andrea. Heartfelt thank you.
Date: 4/29/2018 5:02:00 PM
What a lovely dream, sweet Jean! Congrats!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 4/29/2018 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jean,, wonderful poetry, you really take the reader there...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Harry.
Date: 4/29/2018 10:37:00 AM
Jean, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest, I really liked your dreamy write, well done !
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:09:00 AM
I enjoyed the process Constance. Thank you for my placement.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Jean, beautiful dream.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you James.
Date: 4/29/2018 7:18:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 4/29/2018 3:07:00 AM
I did come to you in a dream, jean, but you locked the bloody French doors :(
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 3:09:00 AM
So it was you? If only I knew..... Actually I do have French doors leading into my bedroom that I lock at night Viv. How did you know that? Oh yes of course, in dreams we can travel far.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this musical poem. Well done.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/29/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 4/23/2018 6:17:00 PM
this is very lovely, jean! i enjoyed...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/24/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Ilene.
Date: 4/23/2018 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful nostalgic imagery, Jean. Love your title.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/23/2018 5:00:00 PM
Than you Line. I had the last line back to front until I realized my mistake, then put forever at the other end.
Date: 4/23/2018 3:37:00 PM
Wow... Lovely is lovely...and this poem sets the scene for some good loving...Nice one Jean...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/23/2018 3:41:00 PM
And everyone loves a bit of good loving Arturo. At least sitting here alone, I can set the scene. Thank you for your visit.
Date: 4/23/2018 3:22:00 PM
This is awesome..a melodious rendering..floating on the Danube..good work Jean..This should win easily.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 4/23/2018 3:30:00 PM
You are so generous Vijay. I love your comments. This one took a while but I enjoyed the process. It's no harm to be reigned in sometimes.