Jean Murray Poet Verse

Let It Play On

From the violin of lady fair
soft classical notes fill the air.

soothing music floats through open french doors
carried on a summer breeze
billowing lace curtains 

As I lie upon the chaise lounge
in and out of sleep I doze.
Sweet melody a lullaby.
Heavy eyelids begin to close.

Deep in my slumber 
he comes to me in a dream.
In his arms I swoon
as we waltz to Blue Danube.
Forever let it play on.



Broken Wing's contest.
It's All About Four.
23/04/2018

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Eve Roper May 1, 2018 at 8:17 PM Jean, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`* Jean Murray May 2, 2018 at 4:09 AM Thank you Eve.

Tim Smith May 1, 2018 at 10:28 AM Oh wow, gorgeous Jean Murray May 1, 2018 at 2:09 PM Not as wow as your recent offerings unfortunately Tim.

Nette Onclaud April 30, 2018 at 4:11 PM music to my ears... big congrats, jean.. huggs Jean Murray April 30, 2018 at 4:13 PM That's lovely Nette. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2018 at 5:46 PM I started from the bottom up, seeing most of the poems and working my way up the list. So far, this is one of my favorites. Just beautiful. Congrats for your win, Jean. Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 5:55 PM That is just the sweetest thing, especially from you Andrea. Heartfelt thank you.

Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2018 at 5:02 PM What a lovely dream, sweet Jean! Congrats! Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 5:15 PM Thank you Kim.

Harry Horsman April 29, 2018 at 11:26 AM Congrats on your win Jean,, wonderful poetry, you really take the reader there... Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 11:31 AM Thank you Harry.

Constance La France April 29, 2018 at 10:37 AM Jean, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest, I really liked your dreamy write, well done ! Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 11:09 AM I enjoyed the process Constance. Thank you for my placement.

James Inman April 29, 2018 at 8:20 AM Beautiful imagery Jean, beautiful dream. Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 8:28 AM Thank you James.

Line Gauthier April 29, 2018 at 7:18 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Jean. Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 7:23 AM Thank you Line.

Viv Wigley April 29, 2018 at 3:07 AM I did come to you in a dream, jean, but you locked the bloody French doors :( Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 3:09 AM So it was you? If only I knew..... Actually I do have French doors leading into my bedroom that I lock at night Viv. How did you know that? Oh yes of course, in dreams we can travel far.

Susan Gentry April 29, 2018 at 2:10 AM Congratulations on your win with this musical poem. Well done. Jean Murray April 29, 2018 at 2:35 AM Thank you Susan.

Ilene Bauer April 23, 2018 at 6:17 PM this is very lovely, jean! i enjoyed... Jean Murray April 24, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you Ilene.

Line Gauthier April 23, 2018 at 4:54 PM Beautiful nostalgic imagery, Jean. Love your title. Jean Murray April 23, 2018 at 5:00 PM Than you Line. I had the last line back to front until I realized my mistake, then put forever at the other end.

Arturo Michael April 23, 2018 at 3:37 PM Wow... Lovely is lovely...and this poem sets the scene for some good loving...Nice one Jean... Jean Murray April 23, 2018 at 3:41 PM And everyone loves a bit of good loving Arturo. At least sitting here alone, I can set the scene. Thank you for your visit.

Vijay Pandit April 23, 2018 at 3:22 PM This is awesome..a melodious rendering..floating on the Danube..good work Jean..This should win easily. Jean Murray April 23, 2018 at 3:30 PM You are so generous Vijay. I love your comments. This one took a while but I enjoyed the process. It's no harm to be reigned in sometimes.