Let It Bleed

all it took was one person
to uncover my wounds
"let it bleed" she says...

all the things i covered up
all the bruises and the cuts
its time to let it bleed...

my soul wrapped in bandages
a heart thats inflammed
its time to let it bleed...

so many secreats i kept
all the men that crept
its time to let it bleed...

the child that could have been
the nightmares that began
its time to let it bleed...

since my words are like vapor
my tears and ink hit the paper
its time to let it bleed...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 12:48 PM
wow this is a great poem and poetry is a great way to let it bleed which we all need to do i liked each stanza for different reasons, expression of sorrow, secrets and fears is all in this great write!=)Jo
Ryerson Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 6:40 PM
Very nice stuff, Monica...and yes, we all need to 'let it bleed' from time to time...Good work! - Tim
Espinoza Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:19 PM
thanks for commenting on my words....WOW back to you....i feel everyword you have written...keep writing....i will read all the rest you have written
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Writing helps. Putting down and letting it go helps to heal. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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