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Let It Bleed

all it took was one person to uncover my wounds "let it bleed" she says... all the things i covered up all the bruises and the cuts its time to let it bleed... my soul wrapped in bandages a heart thats inflammed its time to let it bleed... so many secreats i kept all the men that crept its time to let it bleed... the child that could have been the nightmares that began its time to let it bleed... since my words are like vapor my tears and ink hit the paper its time to let it bleed...

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/22/2010 12:48:00 PM

wow this is a great poem and poetry is a great way to let it bleed which we all need to do i liked each stanza for different reasons, expression of sorrow, secrets and fears is all in this great write!=)Jo

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/15/2009 6:40:00 PM

Very nice stuff, Monica...and yes, we all need to 'let it bleed' from time to time...Good work! - Tim

Delia Maria Espinoza

Date: 12/15/2009 5:19:00 PM

thanks for commenting on my words....WOW back to you....i feel everyword you have written...keep writing....i will read all the rest you have written

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2009 4:33:00 PM

Writing helps. Putting down and letting it go helps to heal. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara