Let it -----RAIN, Lyrics

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Thanks, Obsidian butterfly and others for given me the pain. I got a couple of poems out of it.

Words from my poem "The Winter's Lullaby, lyric." Ideas from my poem "Where to Start,lyrics", also one line for "The Sapphire Star, lyircs", and "Paint Me an Ugly Duck, lyrics"

Also thanks you, Kai Michael Neumann for posting these words "volcanic eruption of the soul"

?? Suno - Trigger Warning: Contains language that may not be appropriate for all listeners.

Demo - "Where to Start" https://suno.com/song/796cc8cb-8af0-4b97-b487-8671470344b1

Demo - "Let it -----Rain"

https://suno.com/song/e1b6235b-1da9-45c5-aa4a-9a58b4565ff8

Version 2 Extended

https://suno.com/song/ed5e133f-7713-44d9-a3c6-1ee10af385c5

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I'm trapped in this cave
Enslaved by a legion of chains
Your puppets jeer and taunt
Painting the wall as droplets fall
The cobra dance in the flame
Scarlet and velvet choke the air
Till a heartbeat broke in the lair
Creeping echoes from the deep
Stir my memories from their sleep 

Your eyes hollowed
Your heart borrowed

You .... whore, let it ..... rain!
Volcanic skies feed your ...... greed!
Burn your tapestries, soaked in sin
Treasure the rot that festers within
As Cleopatra choked on the serpent’s kiss
So Drown in venom. Drown in bliss

My epiphany, late
For I was far too blind to see
Your love a mask of lies
A vampiress, thirsts for her meal
Crossing the sea with blood to spill
You clouded my Crystal Cerulean Skies!
A succubus in disguise
'seeing red the siren screams'
Plundering hopes and dreams


In the path of Vesuvius
Drums of madness of the chorus 
'Crimson emaciated curtains descend upon the floor 
Moribund, eviscerated, veiled; the music is no more'

Your eyes hollowed
Your heart borrowed

You .... whore! let it ...... rain!
Volcanic skies feed your ...... greed!
Burn your tapestries, soaked in sin
Treasure the rot that festers within
As Cleopatra choked on the serpent’s kiss
So drown in venom. Die in your bliss

I hate you!
I hate you!

Your eyes hollowed
Your heart borrowed

You .....whore! let it.....rain!
Volcanic skies feed your ...... greed!
Burn your tapestries, soaked in sin
Treasure the rot that festers within
Cleopatra choked on the serpent’s kiss
So drown in venom. 
You .....whore, let it .....rain!
Volcanic skies feed your .....greed!
Go drown in your venom.
you (unholy) (bloody) gorgon

You! Ouroboros-cursed (witch)!

i... hate y-oooouu...

i... hate y-oooouu...

i... (bloody) hate you...

I... (bloody) hate you...

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