let her know

Let her know.
Did you let her know her?
When you stopped being obsessed with her?
She still stares at the pictures, now it’s all just a memory
that keeps playing in her mind.
She misses telling you about her day and your magical presence.
But did you let her know when you weren’t hers anymore?
Can the clock stop, adjusting without you wasn’t in the plan.
If she focuses on the present, what will you present to her?
Why do you do that to her, find a way to slide back into her life?
Awakening the love, she would convince herself is over
The thought that you’re redoing it all with another.
Did you let her know she had no access to you anymore ?
Did you let her know that she should detach from you,
All she wants is to unzip the thoughts from your mind,
Get the last glance, watch the hope of our future in your eyes.
But when you told her it had always been her.
If she hears that again itll crush her cause it won’t be from you.
All the love poems she’s written were because of you
for she had wanted it to be you all this time.
A piece of her heart that you once stole still beats for you.
But did you let her know that she wasn’t your forever?
Well, she wants to let you know that
she can’t be there to fix your broken heart anymore.
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Date: 7/29/2025 2:44:00 AM
"Well, she wants to let you know that she can’t be there to fix your broken heart anymore." What an amazing last line. Excellent poetry - excellent poem! :) john
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Date: 7/29/2025 4:48:00 AM
thank you very much !!
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