Jan Allison Poet Limerick

Let Her Eat Cake - For Mum

I went into my kitchen to bake
An enormous rich chocolate cake
Mother gobbled the lot -
On the plate not a jot
No wonder she's got belly ache!

Mum challenged me to write a limerick about cake!

10/3/18

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Eve Roper October 5, 2018 at 7:27 PM great limerick :) my captcha is : DEB so I couldn't resist to write an acrostic... dear mom - eat to much cake - buttercream frosting

Lindsay Laurie October 4, 2018 at 1:54 AM G'day Jan … I know the bloody feeling. I sympathize with your Mother - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta October 3, 2018 at 8:17 PM Sorry, it isn't clear to me if you actually baked the cake your mother ate? My daughter and I both love the batter! Aloha! Rico

Daniel Turner October 3, 2018 at 6:50 PM Turned out to be more than I could take, All night her moaning kept me awake, I gave her a powder, Which made her moan louder, And her farting made the whole house shake.

Mike Gentile October 3, 2018 at 2:52 PM A really cute this one this is Jan

Winged Warrior October 3, 2018 at 1:37 PM You sure there wasn't a file in that cake lol...great limerick Jan, Queen of...love & light...^WW^

Robert Bellam October 3, 2018 at 1:12 PM My downfall was biscuits and honey. I found them under a towel and ate the lot and paid dearly for it later both in redness and stomach ache. My mother would have loved this too. Bob

Ilene Bauer October 3, 2018 at 12:24 PM ha! i'm sure your mother had a good laugh over this one, jan...

Tom Cunningham October 3, 2018 at 9:43 AM Fiction or not Jan, its made my mouth water. Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 4:05 PM Thanks Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 3, 2018 at 8:44 AM Yum and giggles x Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 4:04 PM Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues October 3, 2018 at 7:53 AM LOL! Bet she loved it. You served it up! Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2018 at 5:18 AM Ahh...temptation! Don’t I know it! Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 4:04 PM She actually prefers coffee or lemon drizzle cake. i do make them for her occasionally but usually buy cake when we are out together for coffe so its less temptation for me and hubby!:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands October 3, 2018 at 7:45 AM Great one Jan! :) Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 4:03 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams October 3, 2018 at 7:24 AM Reads like a cake limerick to me. Funny........As a cake eater, I approve!!!...........80) Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 4:02 PM Thanks Pat:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2018 at 7:13 AM - Your mother will love this cake, Jan :) ... yummy for mummy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 7:19 AM She'll like the poem sadly there is no cake I wrote it on the bus I'm on lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit October 3, 2018 at 7:05 AM A sweet creation adorned with love for mother...sharing and creating memories that bond forever. Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 7:07 AM Just a fun poem Vijay I rarely bake anymore just sugar free flapjack for hubby:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser October 3, 2018 at 7:01 AM Ooh, that's a great one! Who could possibly resist chocolate? Jan Allison October 3, 2018 at 7:06 AM A poem just for fun lol, I rarely bake now as hubby is diabetic,but I will make chocolate almond brownies when my son returns from his travels in the far east:-) Hugs Jan xx