Let Go

Illusions of bitterness beclouding my thoughts The closer the deeper, the pains still hurts The betrayal still lingers, memory refreshes The prospect of re occurrence flashes before my Senses Divine orders asking to let go If only I had the guts to confront my closest foe The ever brewing thoughts that to err is human I won’t fall for that for betrayal is inhuman And if all my Judgement are washed away Then the wind blows my thoughts astray Yet will I not forget your grievous betrayal For it is written in the tablets of my heart forever

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Darren White

Date: 3/8/2017 1:02:00 PM

Betrayal is a terrible thing, and bitterness eats you away... The poem is beautiful, but sad.

John Hamilton

Date: 3/4/2017 9:38:00 AM

Betrayal is one of the worst enemies to ones healthy mental state, hard to forgive harder to forget, I feel this write and the emotion evoked. Hope this is fictional!