Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Let 'Er Rip 2 Petty Poet

PETTY POET

You deem
to stand in judgement of me
your mealy mouth poised
whining and whinging
such scathing sarcastic sniveling

What gives you the right
to tear me apart
with vitriolic venom
dripping like slimy snot 
from your gigantic gob

Listen up you block head -
pin back your lugholes
because
I’VE HAD ENOUGH!

I don’t give a toss about your opinion
not even a flying fig

after all ...

with your turgid twaddle
you’re hardly William Shakespeare!


Let er rip#2 contest

12/13/18

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Michelle Faulkner December 30, 2018 at 3:07 PM Back with belated congratulations on your win with this ravishing rant! Jan Allison December 30, 2018 at 3:23 PM Thanks Michelle I had such fun with this theme lol, My favourite line is the turgid twaddle one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper December 29, 2018 at 11:21 PM Back with congratulations on your win! Jan Allison December 30, 2018 at 3:22 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart December 29, 2018 at 9:48 AM Awesome, Jan! Let her have it. Congrats. Jan Allison December 29, 2018 at 11:12 AM LOl Dale, oh it was fun to let my muse lose with this subject lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf December 17, 2018 at 9:22 PM Way to dish it out, Jan! Encore!! Love it! :) gw Jan Allison December 17, 2018 at 9:29 PM a change from my usual style GW it was fun to write lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong December 14, 2018 at 10:29 PM Wow Jan...this will remind me never to get on your bad side...Just kidding! You really let er rip! Does that also mean they can RIP? Haha. I love your sense of humor. Cheers, Connie : ) Jan Allison December 15, 2018 at 4:01 AM lol Connie, hubby almost hid behind the sofa when i read it to him lol:-) I do like to shock with a darker poem from time to time, John told us to let rip so I did lol:-) Anyone who belittles and bullies about our poems can rip as far as I'm concerned, there is not need for it ,,, it really is a time for 'no comment'!:-( hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner December 14, 2018 at 2:43 PM This is a winner for me, simply because you used 'turgid twaddle' - unbeatable! Jan Allison December 15, 2018 at 3:59 AM lol thanks Michelle, I rarely write stuff like this I much prefer humour but I couldn't resist for the let 'er rip contest. I loved that word paring too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith December 14, 2018 at 7:38 AM Let em have it Jan Jan Allison December 14, 2018 at 12:33 PM I hope I did Tim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhona Mcferran December 14, 2018 at 4:28 AM Excellently penned!! ;) Sorry you've had people criticize your poems in the past, and that it's still going on at the 'Soup... If you see any more negative commenters, feel free to direct them to my article on the subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/article/dont_be_a_poem-panner!-1988 Not sure whether it will make a difference, but who knows? Jan Allison December 14, 2018 at 12:32 PM Nothing negative for me recently but I have seen vitriol directed to others recently:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 13, 2018 at 10:08 PM I really like this, for me is actually very well written poetry, it sis not as easy as some thing to write such expressive poetry, in a good for that flows well, and you have done this. Jan Allison December 14, 2018 at 3:10 AM Thanks Art, its a little different to my normal poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina December 13, 2018 at 8:13 PM Damn, remind me not to ever dis-like you, Jan..lol No worries, that will never happen :) Good luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie xx Jan Allison December 14, 2018 at 3:09 AM lol Charles, I do surprise folk with a dark poem from time to time, hubby finally emerged after cowering behind the sofa when I read it to him lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper December 13, 2018 at 6:41 PM Enjoyed reading, Jan, you have a way of painting a let er rip poem.. Good luck in the contest.. Jan Allison December 13, 2018 at 7:20 PM It was fun to go over to the dark side Eve lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin December 13, 2018 at 5:51 PM Wow, are you sure it's fiction? Great write, good luck in the contest! Jan Allison December 13, 2018 at 5:53 PM Its based on something that happened some time back but i have seen negative comments recently and I just felt like letting rip for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer December 13, 2018 at 5:05 PM jan - i promise to stay on your good side! seriously, though, anyone who would criticize someone else's work on a poetry site deserves some of that well-written wrath! you go, girl! Jan Allison December 13, 2018 at 5:08 PM Thanks Ilene, hubby is hiding behind the sofa he was so shocked when I read this to him as its so different from my usual poems although i have done stuff like this a few years ago:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands December 13, 2018 at 4:57 PM LOL Oh my word. This had me laughing. No-one has the right to tear anyone apart and you sure told them ! Jan Allison December 13, 2018 at 5:01 PM It's actually a fiction poem - although my pooetry has been attacked in the past .. its such a shame I didn't blast the morons with a poem like this at the time lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green December 13, 2018 at 4:56 PM Oh come on Jan, don't hold back...tell them how you really feel. :) Wow, this was loud and angry and hopefully whoever it was intended for finds it and runs for the hills. Jan Allison December 13, 2018 at 5:00 PM Hubby is so shocked he's hiding behind the sofa lol:-) seriously I had some sad news today and I guess this is my muse letting rip at the world:-( hugs jan xx