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Let 'Er Rip 2 Petty Poet

PETTY POET

You deem
to stand in judgement of me
your mealy mouth poised
whining and whinging
such scathing sarcastic sniveling

What gives you the right
to tear me apart
with vitriolic venom
dripping like slimy snot 
from your gigantic gob

Listen up you block head -
pin back your lugholes
because
I’VE HAD ENOUGH!

I don’t give a toss about your opinion
not even a flying fig

after all ...

with your turgid twaddle
you’re hardly William Shakespeare!


Let er rip#2 contest

12/13/18

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2018

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Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/30/2018 3:07:00 PM Back with belated congratulations on your win with this ravishing rant! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2018 3:23:00 PM Thanks Michelle I had such fun with this theme lol, My favourite line is the turgid twaddle one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 12/29/2018 11:21:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2018 3:22:00 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 12/29/2018 9:48:00 AM Awesome, Jan! Let her have it. Congrats. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/29/2018 11:12:00 AM LOl Dale, oh it was fun to let my muse lose with this subject lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/17/2018 9:22:00 PM Way to dish it out, Jan! Encore!! Love it! :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/17/2018 9:29:00 PM a change from my usual style GW it was fun to write lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/14/2018 10:29:00 PM Wow Jan...this will remind me never to get on your bad side...Just kidding! You really let er rip! Does that also mean they can RIP? Haha. I love your sense of humor. Cheers, Connie : ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2018 4:01:00 AM lol Connie, hubby almost hid behind the sofa when i read it to him lol:-) I do like to shock with a darker poem from time to time, John told us to let rip so I did lol:-) Anyone who belittles and bullies about our poems can rip as far as I'm concerned, there is not need for it ,,, it really is a time for 'no comment'!:-( hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/14/2018 2:43:00 PM This is a winner for me, simply because you used 'turgid twaddle' - unbeatable! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/15/2018 3:59:00 AM lol thanks Michelle, I rarely write stuff like this I much prefer humour but I couldn't resist for the let 'er rip contest. I loved that word paring too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 12/14/2018 7:38:00 AM Let em have it Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2018 12:33:00 PM I hope I did Tim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhona Mcferran Date: 12/14/2018 4:28:00 AM Excellently penned!! ;) Sorry you've had people criticize your poems in the past, and that it's still going on at the 'Soup... If you see any more negative commenters, feel free to direct them to my article on the subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/article/dont_be_a_poem-panner!-1988 Not sure whether it will make a difference, but who knows? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2018 12:32:00 PM Nothing negative for me recently but I have seen vitriol directed to others recently:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/13/2018 10:08:00 PM I really like this, for me is actually very well written poetry, it sis not as easy as some thing to write such expressive poetry, in a good for that flows well, and you have done this. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2018 3:10:00 AM Thanks Art, its a little different to my normal poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina Date: 12/13/2018 8:13:00 PM Damn, remind me not to ever dis-like you, Jan..lol No worries, that will never happen :) Good luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/14/2018 3:09:00 AM lol Charles, I do surprise folk with a dark poem from time to time, hubby finally emerged after cowering behind the sofa when I read it to him lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 12/13/2018 6:41:00 PM Enjoyed reading, Jan, you have a way of painting a let er rip poem.. Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2018 7:20:00 PM It was fun to go over to the dark side Eve lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 12/13/2018 5:51:00 PM Wow, are you sure it's fiction? Great write, good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2018 5:53:00 PM Its based on something that happened some time back but i have seen negative comments recently and I just felt like letting rip for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 12/13/2018 5:05:00 PM jan - i promise to stay on your good side! seriously, though, anyone who would criticize someone else's work on a poetry site deserves some of that well-written wrath! you go, girl! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2018 5:08:00 PM Thanks Ilene, hubby is hiding behind the sofa he was so shocked when I read this to him as its so different from my usual poems although i have done stuff like this a few years ago:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands Date: 12/13/2018 4:57:00 PM LOL Oh my word. This had me laughing. No-one has the right to tear anyone apart and you sure told them ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2018 5:01:00 PM It's actually a fiction poem - although my pooetry has been attacked in the past .. its such a shame I didn't blast the morons with a poem like this at the time lol:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green Date: 12/13/2018 4:56:00 PM Oh come on Jan, don't hold back...tell them how you really feel. :) Wow, this was loud and angry and hopefully whoever it was intended for finds it and runs for the hills. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/13/2018 5:00:00 PM Hubby is so shocked he's hiding behind the sofa lol:-) seriously I had some sad news today and I guess this is my muse letting rip at the world:-( hugs jan xx