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Let Drip Hot Liquid

hot diamond drops slowly come down to belly wait current will come screen's glow emits light chosen words all fingers type hot diamond drops computer is on if miss now will not be then let drip hot liquid

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Date: 9/4/2014 3:36:00 PM
Dear BL, the "chosen words" you write ignite passion. The computer may be on, but I think your mind is wrapped in passionate "hot liquid." Very beautiful poem, my friend. Love, carolyn
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2014 4:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl

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