Lessons Learned

Do not seek or chose to find, correction in another’s mind; When at the heart of all, we know; enlightenment comes from what we sow. To criticize or correct ourselves is for the best since others seldom can surmise the simplest jest. In deference to said life so roughly hewn ‘tis the clown that earns heavenly boon. For the gift of lucidity is rare without calamity and few honorifics abound for those who claim sanity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Deborah, I forgot to say... There is a LOT of insight in this well writtin Didactic poem. Soupmail. xoxoxox Dane Ann
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August 27, 2009 at 7:47 AM
You've got this one right Deborah! Didn't they think that Einstein was insane? And of course, there's Van Gough, Jackson Pollock, and who was that musician? Wolfgang Amadeus Beethoven! So, I guess if one is insane, they're in GREAT company.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 5:46 PM
It is the "normal" ones who are messed up. Th-th-th-that's all folks. Vince
Beaudre Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 10:05 AM
This is a wonderful poem!
Orozco Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Good write! Really grabs my mind!- eddie
Lokken Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:25 PM
This is so insightful and enlightening. The first and last stanzas say it all. Beautifully written. Love, Sara:)
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 10:00 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Deborah. You rock my socks dear friend. Love, Carol
Dvorkis Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 6:36 AM
oh hell no I'm as looney as they come. this is a new form for you. worded very scholarly and the iambic flow rolls gently out of the calm mind right into my world of nuttyness. you're quite dead on though, no point in fixing other people's messes when we have plenty of our own to contend with....:) see there's that smile again...(also *choose enlightened one:) Have a nice trip. -Yoni
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
Strand Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 1:56 AM
Thank you for your comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
Freeman Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 9:41 PM
Awesome verse, I think I am in agreement, not that you need it. Lol, Moses
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 8:38 PM
Thought provoking, interesting, and insightful poetry wrapped up in one! Great work!
Jackson Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 8:15 PM
I enjoyed this poem!
Coles Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 7:02 PM
Wonderfully written . . I agree that the last couplet ends this piece beautifully. "Few honorifics for those who claim sanity" <-- absolutely agree.
Mcmullin Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 6:35 PM
So of truth, the last couplet that binds the entire poem together nicely. Beautiful and a favorite! poet butterfly
Ryusaka Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 5:54 PM
I love this line "For the gift of lucidity is rare without calamity" so true... and beautifully and aptly spoken. Great job, and thank you for all your comments on my work. I really appreciate the time you take to read and critique =]
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