Lessons From the Leaves and the Tree Ii - Coming Home

Winter has arrived
its icy fingers knocking
the door of the tree

The tree was shaken
from her roots to her branches
afraid for her leaves

She love all of them
in all their sizes and forms
they are part of her

Life was good for them
in calm and stormy weather
they stood together

But life works that way
everything that is alive
has to return home

All the leaves felt sad
as they tightly clung to her
afraid to let go

But winter lasted
for months that made them weaker
they stopped holding on

The tree hugged them all
as the hour of parting came
grateful for the times

They were together
under the sunshine and rain
and bitter cold winds

Slowly the leaves fell
floating in sweet surrender 
as the wind blew on

The cold made them shrink
as they drifted far away
leaving the tree sad

Snow was pouring on
wrapping them gently with flakes
that felt very cold

Prodding them downward
to the ground of soft earth bed
where all leaves fell on

The leaves felt at peace
as the wind transported them
to the waiting ground

They became weightless
freed from all the earthly things
that had burdened them

Coming home is freedom
life on the tree was transient
a passing journey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/25/2015 12:02:00 PM
WOW! This is such an exceptionally beautiful string of haiku! Excellent and deserving of a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/25/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Pandita. your comment means so much. Have a wonderful weekend... Shada
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