Lesson To the Living

One man died many years too soon
   When he stepped through death's dark door.
Another died, a woman dear,
   At the age of ninety-four.

The man left life with much undone,
   With vows he meant to keep.
The woman’s life was full and long,
   Though her body yearned for sleep.

The differences between the two
   Were as clear as night and day.
Those things they held in common
   Only a few could say.

Their deaths have taught one lesson
   Which I hold to very close,
How long we must live our lives
   No one really knows.

So live your life to the fullest,
   Reap all you can and more,
You’ll never know when death will come
   To see you through the door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kaufman Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 2:03 PM
This is a very thought provoking piece and echos, "time is of the essence" and "seize the day" but my old brain isn't sure where those sayings originated from. I enjoyed it and thank you for visiting my page today and taking the time to comment. Blessings dear poet!
Summers Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 8:08 PM
Thanks so much for checking this one out. I’ll be sure to read more of your work. John
Volumes Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:34 PM
This poem gave me chills, realizing all the things I have left to so, so many things undone. This poem is a wake up call if ever was one. Brilliant poem John
Summers Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:25 PM
I guess prioritizing is the way way to go. Even that might not be enough, I knew a man who died in his 90’s that said there wasn’t enough time. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it. John
Deats Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Another good poem and good comments. Sometimes I feel I have lived my life (85) by accident. Started down a road with purpose, then swerved to avoid an obstacle. Been swerving ever since, and that is where the treasures have been found. My goal in life was to be a failure, and I have succeeded happily??.
Summers Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Thanks for reading Hal. I know what you mean, Life can be an obstacle coarse at times. John
Slaughter Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 2:07 PM
That last stanza says it all, John.
Slaughter Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:38 AM
It always seems too soon, to me, no matter how many years a person has managed to put in. Although, I must admit, I do sort of agree with Maurice, as well.
Summers Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thanks for reading Jim. Maurice makes a good point. John
Rigoler Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:07 AM
True words, of course. But, not to appear overly cynical, my friend, what is the point of living life to the fullest (which requires more time and energy than we could ever have) when we die anyway? I do what I enjoy without pushing for more. That way I leave life with no sense of failures. / Maurice
Summers Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Thanks for reading Maurice. I do very little of the pushing anymore. At my age my main concern is knowing where the nearest bathroom is. John
Chuuk Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Death is just standing by the side of our eyes. Always at ready to close in… And you’re absolutely right, we really should enjoy living life to the fullest.
Summers Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 10:00 PM
Thank you Fin for stopping to read and comment. John
Wolf Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:26 PM
That's right. When your number's up, it's up. A mentor once told me, 'No one dies before his appointed time.'
Summers Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 10:03 PM
"Good for you Gershon. My time at the gym hasn't been that helpful. The only machine I like to use is the vending machine. John"
Summers Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Thanks much Tom, I appreciate the visit and response. John
Cunningham Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 10:57 PM
So true John, life is a precious gift and we shouldn't waste one second of it. Tom
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