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Les Cirque des Morts Collab with B J Fitz

A cocooned cacophony of crickets serenades overgrown fields, drowning out the creaking of rusted cars long since abandoned. Maroon and sable tents blot the dilapidated ground— bloated and weathered, strips of fabric flapping in the harsh elements. Legends of wraiths wander, replicating whispers of infected insanity. Laughter lingers in suspect echoes, Rippling from pasts reborn in presents: futures to be later replaced by the past. The smell of burnt sugar crackles with the purr of buttered kerneled corn: invading the nostrils with senses whose stimuli feign belief. A faint humming of Entry of the Gladiators creeps in loudening crescendos, adding to the cacophony deigning dormancy in the field Fragmented timelines intersecting by the call of the Barker Stained cotton candy melts, reconstitutes, melts once more Saturating replicating stands with insidiously sticky omens Ghastly sickeningly sweet mori mementos Resurrecting the dead from preternatural slumber. Within fractured milliseconds, the cycle of the tormented deceased rise From the ashes of unburnt airwaves, Rippling through screaming minutes yet frozen in the midst. A varicosed bearded woman floats aloft grassy overgrowth Reanimated tigers lurk and phantasmal elephants howl, Rings round the air in gaseous hush, like cigars puffed by moustachioed men of game, Insufflating smoke with striped suits in candied reds and white. The air rises to the resurrected show, Cries confused for laughter tickle cochlea of the living.

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Date: 6/28/2025 1:04:00 PM
' From the ashes of unburnt airwaves. ' There's so many creepy images within. Such a haunting collaboration between you and BJ. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/27/2025 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Very creative and a fun read. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 6/27/2025 1:10:00 PM
This collaboration is quite powerful especially as the alliteration and images carry the theme of life as circus acts. Congratulations to both of you for your POTD. Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/27/2025 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...........
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Date: 6/27/2025 10:38:00 AM
lots of beautiful imagery!
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Date: 6/27/2025 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations to you both on winning POTD, with this beautiful poem. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.
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Date: 6/27/2025 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your special day! :)
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/27/2025 5:32:00 AM
drowning out the creaking of rusted cars… Legends of wraiths… Fragmented timelines intersecting by the call of the Barker…a haunting tale! Congrats on POTD!
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:34:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/27/2025 3:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem and collaboration. Congratulations on POTD.
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:33:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/27/2025 2:38:00 AM
The wonderful piece evokes sentiments of (The last of us), with vivid surreal imagery of a post apocalyptic world or (circus) which perhaps the world is anyway, beautifully written and in harmony with each other, which is no mean feat, Congratulations Sara and BJ on a most deserving POTD, cheers David
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/27/2025 2:07:00 AM
What a stunning and excellently crafted collaboration this is, dear Sara and BJ! Both of your lines flow together ever so effortlessly, painting a very rich tapestry of imagery, that is immaculate and very detailed. It's hard to guess which lines are written by you, individually and this is what makes this collaboration even more amazing! The emotions here are so moving along with profound depth in each line.. Heartiest congratulations on receiving the beautiful honour of POTD! Absolutely worthy
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/27/2025 2:04:00 AM
My love, this was hauntingly brilliant. You and BJ conjured such a vivid, eerie, poetic, immersive masterpiece of darkness. "Legends of wraiths wander, replicating whispers of infected insanity" set the tone so well, submerging the reader in a visceral atmosphere. And “cries confused for laughter tickle cochlea of the living”? Utterly chilling. The whole piece unfolds like a cinematic séance—unsettling in all the right ways. Bravo! A well-deserved Poem of the Day
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thank you very much my love.
Date: 6/27/2025 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations Sara and B J on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this beautiful poetry collaboration… Beryl
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/27/2025 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on potd grumpy! Thrilled to see your collaboration featured!
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Ink.
Date: 6/27/2025 12:33:00 AM
Very vivid potd collaboration! Congratulations on your!
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/27/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/26/2025 8:48:00 AM
Dear BJ and sara, Its so nice to see you both collaborate to create and deliver something so eloquent and profound flowing with exquisite diction and such seamless alliterations! I really love the opening and also how youv written so many lines together. So detail oriented and such picturesque and detailed imagery. Brilliant! Its hard for me to figure out who wrote what in this impressive and deeply moving collab! A fave definitely for me! Sending you light
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Sara Jama
Date: 6/26/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Ink for the support and kind words.

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