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Les Braves (Iambic Pentameter) Tan sands conceal deep furrows of their pain, As churned emotions scream on the light breeze. The rushing lather bubbles with red stain, While mortar clouds suppress the dying wheeze, That madly dared to reach the cliffs in vain. The hostile bluff still taunts a flying skein, Where warriors bravely tried to scale the crest. The rock secretes long tales of plaintive strain, Of ones that fought abreast for the oppressed, and finally achieved the winning gain. Yet no win comes without a shocking loss, As the escarpment holds the treasured sons, That fought the menace of the iron cross, to fall heroic to opponents’ guns, but proudly rest in peace ‘neath the grave’s moss Note: Just came back from a visit to the D Day beaches and the American cemetery at Colleville-sur-mer, a great place of reverence. 3rd place trophy winner 10.21.22 Contest: 3 stanza poem in quintain (Sicilian) Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Date: 10/31/2022 1:30:00 AM
Powerful poem Sean and a very well-deserved win.
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Sean Kibble
Date: 10/31/2022 2:15:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comments Terry. The poem does not do justice to the mixture of emotions one feels on a visit to the area.
Date: 10/30/2022 11:56:00 AM
Wow Sean. A powerful write for our fallen. Fabulous win - congratulations! :)
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Sean Kibble
Date: 10/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments Linda. Good to meet you. Take care
Date: 10/30/2022 9:23:00 AM
Well done and congratulations on your winning placement with this poem, Sean.
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Sean Kibble
Date: 10/30/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments.
Date: 10/30/2022 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your tightly written D-Day beaches poem full of rich, memorable images placing on the podium in my contest. Congratulations!
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Sean Kibble
Date: 10/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you very much for the great placement.

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