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Lend Me Your Heart Oh Child

Worth and numbers rarely go hand in hand. Producing seeds which will rot and be eaten by the locust makes barrenness a special kind of blessing. So pay attention and lend me your mind oh child b'cos from it comes the brush to which your life is coloured. Rights enable you claim your hat responsibilities show you when and how to wear it. Manifestation of your works beyond the comprehension of your mates exalts the power of your mind but constant announcement of your own achievements makes you the promoter of their doubts to crown you a liar. Vehicles driven by words are no match for the ones handled by deeds. Let not your free will be cajoled grudges in a hidden corner after the exhibition of charity blows out your light with an awful breath. A non doer and an adamant “no” giver still possess some honour when compared to a chronic complainer. Reputation decorates the corner of an uptight man but it is slavery when one lives on too many principles. A good life is one moving on the chariots of freedom and freedom is running a lifestyle both within and outside without much notice. Habits are great managers to conscience’s liquor stores and character intoxication is closest to the point of irreversibility. A greedy mind is a warehouse run by waste with no room for left overs. A tight fisted hand is self limiting, reducing its surface area to receive. A mind without courtesy to its environs, spinning the world around its own orbit breeds selfishness. Corruption builds thorns around the heart and makes the soul a direct relation to insanity. If false words were grapes, water would be tastier than wine. Exaggeration adds a tail to the bird and makes the dog an Amphibian. But love gives poisons no ground to strive satisfaction without it is the existence of a Leopard in an Elephant’s skin. The gardens of space filled with little rainbows cannot outshine its colours; staying as the only ingredient necessary for the preservation of humanity. When your mind is at peace with itself, then is the Joy of my inheritance to you completely whole.

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Date: 2/2/2016 10:56:00 PM
Hello FUNOM: It has all been covered in the replies below. A beautiful and wise poem...eloquently stated. So glad I found it. SuZ
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Suzanne
Date: 2/1/2016 5:49:00 PM
This is an eye opening poem of conscience, described with feeling written by the heart and engraved in the soul and mind. Emile.
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Date: 2/3/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much EMile
Date: 2/1/2016 12:35:00 PM
There seems to be a collection of aphorisms framed by poetic language here. This is an excellent technical work. It could use some touch-ups. I wanted to spend time working with it, punctuation, grammar, etc. Inspiring work! It begs me to envision the child or person being spoken to.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Graphite. You are most kind
Date: 2/1/2016 10:37:00 AM
"A greedy mind is a warehouse run by waste with no room for left overs. A tight fisted hand is self limiting, reducing its surface area to receive"..I especially liked those two lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 2/1/2016 3:34:00 AM
Funom very strong lines that empowers a lesson.. a7 for me.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Olive
Date: 1/30/2016 10:17:00 PM
I am at a loss for words, this is amazing Funom, I really loved the line "But love gives poisons no ground to strive" :)
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Arthur
Date: 1/30/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this gem and for your comment........A.M.
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Afolabi
Date: 1/30/2016 11:29:00 AM
What a great lesson, so elegantly put. Great words mate.
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Scott
Date: 1/28/2016 11:48:00 PM
I agree with Andrea. Powerful messages in this well penned piece, Funon.
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Elaine
Date: 1/28/2016 6:48:00 PM
gosh, Funon, there are so many pearls of wisdom within this poem. VERY nicely done. Debbie Guzzi is right!!! Profound lessons.
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea
Date: 1/28/2016 4:10:00 PM
My goodness such profound lessons! Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Debbie
Date: 1/28/2016 11:34:00 AM
It seems this young fellow has a lot of pitfalls to navigate. This is a metaphorical garden worthy of contemplative consideration.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/1/2016 6:34:00 AM
Yes Richard... I feel so honoured reading your comment once again after a long long while
Date: 1/28/2016 8:17:00 AM
Your descriptions and metaphors reveal where your mind is at. I have nothing but respect and admiration for the way you see the world. This is such a pleasure to read
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:12:00 AM
Oh friend. I lack words to fully express my appreciation. Thank you for making my efforts here worthwhile. I hope the family bond continues as we elevate each other to grow higher and get better.. Thank you once again
Date: 1/28/2016 6:34:00 AM
Almost every line is "Quotes" of value and wisdom. Very enjoyable metaphors.
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Gupta
Date: 1/27/2016 8:27:00 AM
Beautifully expressed list of advice for a young mind, Funom. A 7.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim
Date: 1/26/2016 1:22:00 PM
IF we all found that inner child what a peaceful world it would be. Only as we grow do we find the poisons of life. A 7 from me on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Babcock
Date: 1/26/2016 12:45:00 PM
Great metaphors and analogies in this, Funom! Very insightful! Love, Kim
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim
Date: 1/25/2016 7:32:00 PM
Quite a write on the diversity of life's situation, Funom' also on the possibility of loves redemptive restorative power.'
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Joe Maverick

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