Lemon Slices

LEMON SLICES

rivulets of condensation drip down
the sides of tall glasses-- iced water
lemon slices flavour refreshing reflections

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/7/2013 9:46:00 PM
I like the way you describe that marvelous drink. We need plenty of it in NYC because we are having a very hot summer. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/29/2013 2:22:00 PM
Very good verse is this.Enjoyed the read.The total syllables in a haiku should not exceed 17:))
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Date: 6/22/2013 10:12:00 AM
beauty in a lemonade........pretty awesome......:):):):)
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Date: 6/21/2013 12:30:00 AM
... refreshing reflections. Mmm.. now just add a strawberry or two to the the mix and you got yourself the perfect summertime drink. Fabulous descriptions! I would say it's a bit lengthy considering it's a haiku... almost feels like it wants to be a sijo. But beside the point... still a great poem :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 6/21/2013 12:42:00 AM
Yip.. at a restaurant eating Pizza-- quickly scribbled these two down :) Another P/S member also commented on the format of this Haiku. I guess I am still learning. He said this is a 'modern Haiku' , and the old format is 5/7/5 or something like that... whatever.. enjoyed the drink.
Date: 6/20/2013 3:04:00 PM
just love this...
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Date: 6/16/2013 12:37:00 PM
Ok, your pizza post had me hungry. Now, I'm thirsty. You poetry creates quite the appetite, literally. :)
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