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Lemon Meringue Pie

Lemons picked from my tree
tart-sweet on the tongue
A bit of yellow heaven
Clouds of fluffy white
Beyond elegant
Smooth as silk
Grand!




For the "calorie" contest.....

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Raul Moreno

March 16, 2009 at 1:39 AM

Mmm, nice work and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

March 10, 2009 at 10:00 AM

Wonderful "tart-sweet" description of the lemons that add such great taste to food. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

March 7, 2009 at 12:37 PM

No calories in this one! Right! This one brings back memories of my mother's treats. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Brian Strand

March 6, 2009 at 11:36 PM

Best wishes with this one BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 6, 2009 at 5:11 PM

Dear Barbara, YOU got me licking my lips on this mouth watering sweet treat Did YOU hand Whisk the Meringue just kidding Good Luck in the Contest Barbeeg Xliamp...HG

Ronald Bingham

March 6, 2009 at 5:07 PM

One of my favorite deserts, my wife makes a great meringue pie. Now all I have to do is see if I can sweet talk her into making one, Blessings, Ron

Laurie Ginn

March 6, 2009 at 10:16 AM

Lemons, the smell the tart, sweet bite of the taste you guys are killing my sweet tooth.

Sharon Winter

March 6, 2009 at 10:04 AM

Oh gosh, there are just too many sweets I love. This is simply heavenly! I'll be right over! Lemons from your tree? Wow! Awesome! Excellent! Good luck! Love, Shar