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Lemon Meringue Pie

Lemons picked from my tree tart-sweet on the tongue A bit of yellow heaven Clouds of fluffy white Beyond elegant Smooth as silk Grand! For the "calorie" contest.....

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 1:39:00 AM

Mmm, nice work and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2009 10:00:00 AM

Wonderful "tart-sweet" description of the lemons that add such great taste to food. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Date: 3/7/2009 12:37:00 PM

No calories in this one! Right! This one brings back memories of my mother's treats. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 3/6/2009 11:36:00 PM

Best wishes with this one BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/6/2009 5:11:00 PM

Dear Barbara, YOU got me licking my lips on this mouth watering sweet treat Did YOU hand Whisk the Meringue just kidding Good Luck in the Contest Barbeeg Xliamp...HG

Ronald Bingham

Date: 3/6/2009 5:07:00 PM

One of my favorite deserts, my wife makes a great meringue pie. Now all I have to do is see if I can sweet talk her into making one, Blessings, Ron

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/6/2009 10:16:00 AM

Lemons, the smell the tart, sweet bite of the taste you guys are killing my sweet tooth.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/6/2009 10:04:00 AM

Oh gosh, there are just too many sweets I love. This is simply heavenly! I'll be right over! Lemons from your tree? Wow! Awesome! Excellent! Good luck! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/6/2009 8:37:00 AM

A very tasty write my friend..I can taste the tart and sweetness in this write.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/6/2009 8:18:00 AM

ummmmm...this one makes me think of my mother's lemon pie....heaped with meringue, that was browned slightly in the oven...ummmm!! ~ Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 3/6/2009 8:00:00 AM

I agree with Christie, yummy yum! Sounds delicious and reads so very well. Michael

Arany P.

Date: 3/6/2009 7:21:00 AM

well written!! loved the flavour ~ Arany